Anybody about for a beta? Longish chapter one-- reworked, of my skating romance. Agent Kate wanted more tension and I'm hoping I accomplished it.
Book: Captain, you mind if I say grace? Mal: Only if you say it out loud.
'Serenity'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
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Barb - Aug 15, 2008 6:07:20 am PDT #655 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”
SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 6:09:18 am PDT #656 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
How long are you willing to wait for input, Barb? I'm at work, where I can't really devote my attention to it, but I'd love to take a look at it.
Barb - Aug 15, 2008 6:15:26 am PDT #657 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”
I'm going to be tinkering all weekend, Sail, so no huge hurry, other than the typical author neuroses. *g* You want I should send?
SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 6:17:28 am PDT #658 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Sure, send it to me at work, I can sneak a peek or two at it throughout the day. (It's very slow here, I have a week to go with nothing to do.)
Ellen dot Morin at GE dot com
Allyson - Aug 15, 2008 8:40:15 am PDT #659 of 6681
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
I added you, Stephanie.
Typo Boy - Aug 15, 2008 8:56:45 am PDT #660 of 6681
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.
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Stephanie - Aug 15, 2008 10:16:43 am PDT #661 of 6681
Trust my rage
Thanks!
SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 10:19:02 am PDT #662 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Backflung, Barb.
Barb - Aug 15, 2008 10:25:52 am PDT #663 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”
Backflung, Barb.
Heh-- got it.
Yes, there will be hot angsty sex. And she's young, poor thing. When we next pick up with our intrepid heroine, she's three years older and wiser. *g*
SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 10:28:08 am PDT #664 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Oh, goodie.
::rubs hands in glee::