How long are you willing to wait for input, Barb? I'm at work, where I can't really devote my attention to it, but I'd love to take a look at it.
Very convincing. Makes me completely want to put myself under government control. Please take me to where you can make me unconscious and naked.
Riley ,'Help'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
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SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 6:09:18 am PDT #656 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Barb - Aug 15, 2008 6:15:26 am PDT #657 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”
I'm going to be tinkering all weekend, Sail, so no huge hurry, other than the typical author neuroses. *g* You want I should send?
SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 6:17:28 am PDT #658 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Sure, send it to me at work, I can sneak a peek or two at it throughout the day. (It's very slow here, I have a week to go with nothing to do.)
Ellen dot Morin at GE dot com
Allyson - Aug 15, 2008 8:40:15 am PDT #659 of 6681
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
I added you, Stephanie.
Typo Boy - Aug 15, 2008 8:56:45 am PDT #660 of 6681
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.
If you want another Beta, feel free to send along. Profile addy good.
Stephanie - Aug 15, 2008 10:16:43 am PDT #661 of 6681
Trust my rage
Thanks!
SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 10:19:02 am PDT #662 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Backflung, Barb.
Barb - Aug 15, 2008 10:25:52 am PDT #663 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”
Backflung, Barb.
Heh-- got it.
Yes, there will be hot angsty sex. And she's young, poor thing. When we next pick up with our intrepid heroine, she's three years older and wiser. *g*
SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 10:28:08 am PDT #664 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Oh, goodie.
::rubs hands in glee::
Barb - Aug 15, 2008 11:00:13 am PDT #665 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”
I just sent you the rest of what I've got for the proposal-- still in rough draft stage, but you can at least get the idea where I'm going with this.