Jayne (Husband): Oh, I think you might wanna reconsider that last part. See, I married me a powerful ugly creature. Mal (Wife): How can you say that? How can you shame me in front of new people? Jayne (Husband): If I could make you purtier, I would. Mal (Wife): You are not the man I met a year ago.

'Our Mrs. Reynolds'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Allyson - Aug 15, 2008 8:40:15 am PDT #659 of 6687
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

I added you, Stephanie.


Typo Boy - Aug 15, 2008 8:56:45 am PDT #660 of 6687
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

If you want another Beta, feel free to send along. Profile addy good.


Stephanie - Aug 15, 2008 10:16:43 am PDT #661 of 6687
Trust my rage

Thanks!


SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 10:19:02 am PDT #662 of 6687
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Backflung, Barb.


Barb - Aug 15, 2008 10:25:52 am PDT #663 of 6687
“Not dead yet!”

Backflung, Barb.

Heh-- got it.

Yes, there will be hot angsty sex. And she's young, poor thing. When we next pick up with our intrepid heroine, she's three years older and wiser. *g*


SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 10:28:08 am PDT #664 of 6687
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Oh, goodie.

::rubs hands in glee::


Barb - Aug 15, 2008 11:00:13 am PDT #665 of 6687
“Not dead yet!”

I just sent you the rest of what I've got for the proposal-- still in rough draft stage, but you can at least get the idea where I'm going with this.


SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 11:32:51 am PDT #666 of 6687
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Cool, thanks!


Barb - Aug 16, 2008 6:57:01 am PDT #667 of 6687
“Not dead yet!”

Gah--

I need someone to rescue me from my own head-- I've hit the "OMG, this manuscript totally sucks" portion of the process.

Bleah.


Deena - Aug 16, 2008 10:09:36 am PDT #668 of 6687
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

I'm reading submissions and my brain is a little numb, so I'm asking for help, please?

Zinny finds the hallucinations are persisting.

I dislike this sentence. I'm trying to say why. What is this structure called? Why do I dislike it so? There are words in my brain, but they won't come out!