Gunn: The final score can't be rigged. I don't care how many players you grease, that last shot always comes up a question mark. But here's the thing. You never know when you're taking it. It could be when you're duking it out with the Legion of Doom, or just crossing the street deciding where to have brunch. So you just treat it like it was up to you—the world in balance—'cause you never know when it is.

'Underneath'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Allyson - Aug 15, 2008 8:40:15 am PDT #659 of 6681
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

I added you, Stephanie.


Typo Boy - Aug 15, 2008 8:56:45 am PDT #660 of 6681
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

If you want another Beta, feel free to send along. Profile addy good.


Stephanie - Aug 15, 2008 10:16:43 am PDT #661 of 6681
Trust my rage

Thanks!


SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 10:19:02 am PDT #662 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Backflung, Barb.


Barb - Aug 15, 2008 10:25:52 am PDT #663 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”

Backflung, Barb.

Heh-- got it.

Yes, there will be hot angsty sex. And she's young, poor thing. When we next pick up with our intrepid heroine, she's three years older and wiser. *g*


SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 10:28:08 am PDT #664 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Oh, goodie.

::rubs hands in glee::


Barb - Aug 15, 2008 11:00:13 am PDT #665 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”

I just sent you the rest of what I've got for the proposal-- still in rough draft stage, but you can at least get the idea where I'm going with this.


SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 11:32:51 am PDT #666 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Cool, thanks!


Barb - Aug 16, 2008 6:57:01 am PDT #667 of 6681
“Not dead yet!”

Gah--

I need someone to rescue me from my own head-- I've hit the "OMG, this manuscript totally sucks" portion of the process.

Bleah.


Deena - Aug 16, 2008 10:09:36 am PDT #668 of 6681
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

I'm reading submissions and my brain is a little numb, so I'm asking for help, please?

Zinny finds the hallucinations are persisting.

I dislike this sentence. I'm trying to say why. What is this structure called? Why do I dislike it so? There are words in my brain, but they won't come out!