I'm ste_noni
Gunn: The final score can't be rigged. I don't care how many players you grease, that last shot always comes up a question mark. But here's the thing. You never know when you're taking it. It could be when you're duking it out with the Legion of Doom, or just crossing the street deciding where to have brunch. So you just treat it like it was up to you—the world in balance—'cause you never know when it is.
'Underneath'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Stephanie - Aug 14, 2008 2:26:48 pm PDT #654 of 6728
Trust my rage
Barb - Aug 15, 2008 6:07:20 am PDT #655 of 6728
“Not dead yet!”
Anybody about for a beta? Longish chapter one-- reworked, of my skating romance. Agent Kate wanted more tension and I'm hoping I accomplished it.
SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 6:09:18 am PDT #656 of 6728
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
How long are you willing to wait for input, Barb? I'm at work, where I can't really devote my attention to it, but I'd love to take a look at it.
Barb - Aug 15, 2008 6:15:26 am PDT #657 of 6728
“Not dead yet!”
I'm going to be tinkering all weekend, Sail, so no huge hurry, other than the typical author neuroses. *g* You want I should send?
SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 6:17:28 am PDT #658 of 6728
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Sure, send it to me at work, I can sneak a peek or two at it throughout the day. (It's very slow here, I have a week to go with nothing to do.)
Ellen dot Morin at GE dot com
Allyson - Aug 15, 2008 8:40:15 am PDT #659 of 6728
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
I added you, Stephanie.
Typo Boy - Aug 15, 2008 8:56:45 am PDT #660 of 6728
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.
If you want another Beta, feel free to send along. Profile addy good.
Stephanie - Aug 15, 2008 10:16:43 am PDT #661 of 6728
Trust my rage
Thanks!
SailAweigh - Aug 15, 2008 10:19:02 am PDT #662 of 6728
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Backflung, Barb.
Barb - Aug 15, 2008 10:25:52 am PDT #663 of 6728
“Not dead yet!”
Backflung, Barb.
Heh-- got it.
Yes, there will be hot angsty sex. And she's young, poor thing. When we next pick up with our intrepid heroine, she's three years older and wiser. *g*