The Resurrection Gambit

Part Four: In Retrospect

China, 2023: Wesley stared deep into his Scotch, as if the bottom of the glass could divine their fortunes, could give them some indication that they were on the right path. Of course, thought Dawn, Wesley had long ago lost faith in prophecies.

Dawn scanned her comrades. Xander and Wesley were ill at ease, impatient to begin their work, but knew there was no going until sunrise. Spike seemed pensive, lost in thought.

Once, she and Spike had been close. Now, she couldn’t claim to know him. Oh, she trusted him, she knew they could depend on him when the chips were down, but he’d taken to keeping his own council, the burden of his soul often weighing impossibly on him. Dawn often wondered how it was he didn’t snap. Then she looked hard at him, and in her heart she knew. Beneath the violence and bravado, the pain he’d brought upon himself and others, was a man who never wanted to see anyone suffer like he did. Like those he harmed did.

“Twenty years,” thought Dawn, “and he's nowhere near balancing the scales.”

Spike could sense the tension at the table, the awkwardness that fell like a shadow when Xander had paused his story.

“Hard to believe we thought it was just business as bloody usual,” said Spike. “Guess we never knew what usual was.”

“Angel did,” said Wesley. “I think, in his heart, he always knew what was coming.”

Part Five: Power Shift

Los Angeles, 2003: Angel shed the corporate uniform, the Armani suit and neck tie, in favor of black jeans, a black T-shirt and his leather duster. He passed in silence through the halls to the elevator, emerging on the roof of the Wolfram & Hart building. He looked out at his city, at the lights that flickered against the moonless sky. He saw each light as a soul, as something flaring and beautiful then, eventually, gone.

He would save every one of them if he could. And every single day was a failure, because he could never, ever do that.

A chill flashed down Angel’s spine, and his head jolted upright, nearly wrenching his neck. He wanted to scream, to run, to jump off the building to the safety of oblivion. But he held his ground.

Before him strode an inhumanly beautiful man, walking on air. With each step, sparks lit beneath his feet. The man’s skin was porcelain. His hair vivid gold. His eyes were diamonds. A human would think this was an angel. Angel knew better.

“I am the Juris,” said the man. “You are charged with crimes against our kind. Prepare to be judged.” Its voice was Chopin’s Nocturnes. It was so beautiful that Angel nearly cried.

The older vampires get, the more they take on animalistic forms. The Juris was a vampire so old, so evil, that it had taken on the form of the Earth’s most vicious animal, man.

“What’s my crime?” said Angel, doing his best to remain cool.

“You are charged with the destruction of the order of Aurelius, the destruction of countless of our kind.”

“You left out a few unpaid parking tickets.”

“Silence,” said the Juris. It had barely raised its voice, but somehow the sound of that word shattered glass in surrounding buildings.

“Do you comprehend the depths of rage it takes to summon me?” said the Juris, as Angel steadied himself against the onslaught of its voice. “The loathing and fear? There has been a shift in power, Angelus. War is coming. Everything that was meant to be yours shall be stripped from you.”

Armed Wolfram & Hart security forces suddenly stormed the rooftop. Angel turned his head as they appeared, then quickly returned his attention to the Juris, but it was gone.

“Too late,” he whispered under his breath. “Much too late.”

I love it!

out at his city. at the lights that flickered

comma?

Wonderful stuff, Victor. More, please!

Damn, this is great. I'm going to have to go back and read straight through again. I love the Juris. There's something almost Gaimanesque about the idea of something so evil it has become heartbreakingly beautiful.

Victor, this is totally rocking. Pretty Juris!

Two suggestions:

Dawn’s eyes scanned her comrades.

I blinked at that, because, well, did her eyes do it without her? Moving body parts? It's a bit of very odd phrasing there, and the "eyes" is redundant, because the only part of the body that can scan is eyes, basically.

The other thing:

“Twenty years,” thought Dawn, “and he was nowhere near balancing the scales.”

Tenses. Spike is nowhere near balancing the scales. She's not seeing him in the past tense.

Thanks for the suggestions, Deb. Corrections made!

Pretty Juris!

Heh. I like the Juris. He'll have more to do later. This story is entirely too long. I'll be posting it in pieces 'til doomsday.

There's something almost Gaimanesque about the idea of something so evil it has become heartbreakingly beautiful.

Gaiman? an influence on me? Surely not.

There's something almost Gaimanesque about the idea of something so evil it has become heartbreakingly beautiful.

Huh. That's how I've been thinking of it, though I couldn't flat out define it. Good way to describe it though.

Lovely, Victor. And I don't think you'll find any complaints were you to post till doomsday.

Can you link to the first part, Victor?

Can you link to the first part, Victor?

With my HTML skills, that's always a question. Here goes nothing!

The Ressurection Gambit, Part One

Hey. It worked.