While we're on the subject of eyes, in Part 3, shouldn't
Xander had shielded his eyes from the flash
be "Xander had shielded his eye from the flash" ?
:)
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I kissed him, and I told him that I loved him. And I killed him.
Buffy ,'Same Time, Same Place'
Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
jlp - Jul 01, 2003 1:19:39 pm PDT #4725 of 10001
"I lurk"
victor infante - Jul 01, 2003 1:28:50 pm PDT #4726 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
be "Xander had shielded his eye from the flash" ?
You're right. And now it is.
This is why I'm kind to ME writers about minor continuity errors.
Beverly - Jul 01, 2003 1:31:39 pm PDT #4727 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
You could make it more or less ambiguous with "Xander had shielded his vision from the flash"
jlp - Jul 01, 2003 1:38:33 pm PDT #4728 of 10001
"I lurk"
It's a great story, BTW. I can't wait to see the rest of it.
victor infante - Jul 01, 2003 1:59:00 pm PDT #4729 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
You could make it more or less ambiguous with "Xander had shielded his vision from the flash"
Nah. The Cyclops joke gives it away.
It's a great story, BTW. I can't wait to see the rest of it.
Thanks. Parts 6-45 should be any day now.
Not sure I'm joking.
Elena - Jul 01, 2003 3:19:46 pm PDT #4730 of 10001
Thanks for all the fish.
Victor,
“After a fashion, I suppose,” said Giles casually, as if it were no great revelation.“Oh,&
I think something got cut off....
I'm loving it so very much, Victor. It's grand. I'm all a tingle to see what Juris does.
victor infante - Jul 01, 2003 5:11:03 pm PDT #4731 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
Huh. Weird. Don't know how that got cut off. Will fix later.
V.-
victor infante - Jul 01, 2003 6:03:12 pm PDT #4732 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
OK. Got the weird coding garbage out of the story, and nopw the end comes up.
Computers baffle me.
deborah grabien - Jul 01, 2003 6:17:12 pm PDT #4733 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Computers baffle me.
This is because you are wise, young Jedi.
Lee - Jul 01, 2003 7:17:33 pm PDT #4734 of 10001
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.
Parts 6-45 should be any day now.
Not sure I'm joking.
Not sure you'd hear anyone complaining.