While we're on the subject of eyes, in Part 3, shouldn't
Xander had shielded his eyes from the flash
be "Xander had shielded his eye from the flash" ?
:)
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While we're on the subject of eyes, in Part 3, shouldn't
Xander had shielded his eyes from the flash
be "Xander had shielded his eye from the flash" ?
:)
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be "Xander had shielded his eye from the flash" ?
You're right. And now it is.
This is why I'm kind to ME writers about minor continuity errors.
You could make it more or less ambiguous with "Xander had shielded his vision from the flash"
It's a great story, BTW. I can't wait to see the rest of it.
You could make it more or less ambiguous with "Xander had shielded his vision from the flash"
Nah. The Cyclops joke gives it away.
It's a great story, BTW. I can't wait to see the rest of it.
Thanks. Parts 6-45 should be any day now.
Not sure I'm joking.
Victor,
“After a fashion, I suppose,” said Giles casually, as if it were no great revelation.“Oh,&
I think something got cut off....
I'm loving it so very much, Victor. It's grand. I'm all a tingle to see what Juris does.
Huh. Weird. Don't know how that got cut off. Will fix later.
V.-
OK. Got the weird coding garbage out of the story, and nopw the end comes up.
Computers baffle me.
Computers baffle me.
This is because you are wise, young Jedi.
Parts 6-45 should be any day now.
Not sure I'm joking.
Not sure you'd hear anyone complaining.