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Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies

Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.

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victor infante - Jul 01, 2003 10:28:32 am PDT #4720 of 10001

To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Thanks for the suggestions, Deb. Corrections made!

Pretty Juris!

Heh. I like the Juris. He'll have more to do later. This story is entirely too long. I'll be posting it in pieces 'til doomsday.

There's something almost Gaimanesque about the idea of something so evil it has become heartbreakingly beautiful.

Gaiman? an influence on me? Surely not.

esse - Jul 01, 2003 11:40:21 am PDT #4721 of 10001

S to the A -- using they/them pronouns!

There's something almost Gaimanesque about the idea of something so evil it has become heartbreakingly beautiful.

Huh. That's how I've been thinking of it, though I couldn't flat out define it. Good way to describe it though.

Lovely, Victor. And I don't think you'll find any complaints were you to post till doomsday.

Steph L. - Jul 01, 2003 11:42:27 am PDT #4722 of 10001

this mess was yours / now your mess is mine

Can you link to the first part, Victor?

victor infante - Jul 01, 2003 12:22:54 pm PDT #4723 of 10001

To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Can you link to the first part, Victor?

With my HTML skills, that's always a question. Here goes nothing!

The Ressurection Gambit, Part One

victor infante - Jul 01, 2003 12:24:48 pm PDT #4724 of 10001

To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Hey. It worked.

jlp - Jul 01, 2003 1:19:39 pm PDT #4725 of 10001

"I lurk"

While we're on the subject of eyes, in Part 3, shouldn't

Xander had shielded his eyes from the flash

be "Xander had shielded his eye from the flash" ?

</delurk>

victor infante - Jul 01, 2003 1:28:50 pm PDT #4726 of 10001

To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

be "Xander had shielded his eye from the flash" ?

You're right. And now it is.

This is why I'm kind to ME writers about minor continuity errors.

Beverly - Jul 01, 2003 1:31:39 pm PDT #4727 of 10001

Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

You could make it more or less ambiguous with "Xander had shielded his vision from the flash"

jlp - Jul 01, 2003 1:38:33 pm PDT #4728 of 10001

"I lurk"

It's a great story, BTW. I can't wait to see the rest of it.

victor infante - Jul 01, 2003 1:59:00 pm PDT #4729 of 10001

To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

You could make it more or less ambiguous with "Xander had shielded his vision from the flash"

Nah. The Cyclops joke gives it away.

It's a great story, BTW. I can't wait to see the rest of it.

Thanks. Parts 6-45 should be any day now.

Not sure I'm joking.

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