Thanks for the suggestions, Deb. Corrections made!
Pretty Juris!
Heh. I like the Juris. He'll have more to do later. This story is entirely too long. I'll be posting it in pieces 'til doomsday.
There's something almost Gaimanesque about the idea of something so evil it has become heartbreakingly beautiful.
Gaiman? an influence on me? Surely not.
There's something almost Gaimanesque about the idea of something so evil it has become heartbreakingly beautiful.
Huh. That's how I've been thinking of it, though I couldn't flat out define it. Good way to describe it though.
Lovely, Victor. And I don't think you'll find any complaints were you to post till doomsday.
Can you link to the first part, Victor?
Can you link to the first part, Victor?
With my HTML skills, that's always a question. Here goes nothing!
The Ressurection Gambit, Part One
While we're on the subject of eyes, in Part 3, shouldn't
Xander had shielded his eyes from the flash
be "Xander had shielded his eye from the flash" ?
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be "Xander had shielded his eye from the flash" ?
You're right. And now it is.
This is why I'm kind to ME writers about minor continuity errors.
You could make it more or less ambiguous with "Xander had shielded his vision from the flash"
It's a great story, BTW. I can't wait to see the rest of it.
You could make it more or less ambiguous with "Xander had shielded his vision from the flash"
Nah. The Cyclops joke gives it away.
It's a great story, BTW. I can't wait to see the rest of it.
Thanks. Parts 6-45 should be any day now.
Not sure I'm joking.