Can you link to the first part, Victor?
Elliot: I thought I said discreet. Gwen: What, do you see nipple?
'Just Rewards (2)'
Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
Steph L. - Jul 01, 2003 11:42:27 am PDT #4722 of 10001
this mess was yours / now your mess is mine
victor infante - Jul 01, 2003 12:22:54 pm PDT #4723 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
Can you link to the first part, Victor?
With my HTML skills, that's always a question. Here goes nothing!
The Ressurection Gambit, Part One
victor infante - Jul 01, 2003 12:24:48 pm PDT #4724 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
Hey. It worked.
jlp - Jul 01, 2003 1:19:39 pm PDT #4725 of 10001
"I lurk"
While we're on the subject of eyes, in Part 3, shouldn't
Xander had shielded his eyes from the flash
be "Xander had shielded his eye from the flash" ?
:)
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victor infante - Jul 01, 2003 1:28:50 pm PDT #4726 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
be "Xander had shielded his eye from the flash" ?
You're right. And now it is.
This is why I'm kind to ME writers about minor continuity errors.
Beverly - Jul 01, 2003 1:31:39 pm PDT #4727 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
You could make it more or less ambiguous with "Xander had shielded his vision from the flash"
jlp - Jul 01, 2003 1:38:33 pm PDT #4728 of 10001
"I lurk"
It's a great story, BTW. I can't wait to see the rest of it.
victor infante - Jul 01, 2003 1:59:00 pm PDT #4729 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
You could make it more or less ambiguous with "Xander had shielded his vision from the flash"
Nah. The Cyclops joke gives it away.
It's a great story, BTW. I can't wait to see the rest of it.
Thanks. Parts 6-45 should be any day now.
Not sure I'm joking.
Elena - Jul 01, 2003 3:19:46 pm PDT #4730 of 10001
Thanks for all the fish.
Victor,
“After a fashion, I suppose,” said Giles casually, as if it were no great revelation.“Oh,&
I think something got cut off....
I'm loving it so very much, Victor. It's grand. I'm all a tingle to see what Juris does.
victor infante - Jul 01, 2003 5:11:03 pm PDT #4731 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
Huh. Weird. Don't know how that got cut off. Will fix later.
V.-