Go, Julie, go!

Also, if you go back and taste your seafood meal, you might just be able to adjust the seasonings to bring out the flavour of that magical lobster even better. And get rid of the fucking sand, heathen.

This is her reply to a much more mature constructive criticism:

You're right. I should have posted warnings. Although, I thought the title of this part was very clear and the rating (which is R) I felt was enough. Of course, I have now posted that there is violence so nobody else will be surprised.

there is no title beyond "Profound Bond Part Three"

I apologize if you were offended by such a chapter. This was my first written violence chapter and I did not mean to surprise anybody.

hence the warning for violence only after a commenter noted the lack

Also, I do not edit my Supernatural stories. This is mostly because I do not have a beta for these written accounts of fiction but mainly because I write these out and post them right away. I generally write non- stop at one time in a freewrtiting manner, which why I do have mistakes.

Need I say more?

It saddens me that you will no longer be reading this story. I not take offense but it does hurt to know that there are those who do not like what I have come up with.

Dude, it's not the content, it's your lack of spellcheck, which google has for free, or mozilla.

If you are interested you can take a look at my profile and go through other stories I have posted on here. I do not know your preferred pairing but this is the only Destiel fic I have going. Seeing as it if my first one, I wanted to finish this one before I go on to make more Dean/Cas stories.

The writer hears the concrit and absorbs it to the point that after acknowledging that the commenter will no longer read any more of her stories, to please feel free to read MORE of her stories.

Thanks for all the fish.

She's either fourteen or English is not her first language. And neither one really excuses her.

Writing's not a speed sport, babe. Take. Your. Time.

I have more respect for people who's English is not native, they tend to know grammar better than I do.

There is no prize at the finish line.

Apparently MISS CAPS has submitted to my will. I feel bad and also totally don't believe her or that she had any clue what I was talking about.

pbrelish asks (what a strange name, who could that be?)

Just curious: Any reason why you are adamant about not editing your stories? Like, can't find a beta, or you don't think you need one?

ava replies

I'm glad you asked that.

Really, I just freestyle my fics. Mostly when I write them, I write them how I sort of live through the story. I feel like if I went back and edited or changed something (because I am never really satisfied with any of my stories) then it would lose the emotion or message I was trying to convey.

Personally, I think the first time you write something it's at its best. It shows exactly how the author felt when they wrote it, it shows where they were at in their lives.

Does that sort of answer your question?

She's crazy, isn't she? Delusional and crazy. I am in awe of her wily craziness, to be able to maintain it's existence so politely.

I wonder if she realises I don't give a flying fuck about where she is in her life at any given time, and if I did, I wouldn't read her fic to find out. I read fic for a cracking story.

I know it's weird, but it's how I roll.

Apparently this is a web series starring Misha who plays a priest. Bring on the crossover fic.

I did see one photo from it, which I'm sure inspired Cas-as-priest fic.

Completely off topic:

Why is it so ridiculously hot that Sam can pick locks and steal cars? Discuss, and as ita says, show your work.