Gud, I just appreciate anything at all, really. Thanks for helping me.
That's insane troll logic!
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The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
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Allyson - Sep 11, 2009 6:18:12 pm PDT #2177 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
Burrell - Sep 11, 2009 7:29:03 pm PDT #2178 of 6690
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!
I have it Allyson but I've been waylaid by illness. I can get to it this weekend. Plus I plan on sharing with the kids.
Allyson - Sep 12, 2009 11:12:13 am PDT #2179 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
Loving and appreciating the feedback so far!
I'm just so happy with it right now. Even if an editor doesn't buy it, I tried my hand at fiction, and did the best I could. I wrote a second book. Huzzuh.
Ginger - Sep 12, 2009 11:28:38 am PDT #2180 of 6690
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda
I'm sending my right now.
Scrappy - Sep 12, 2009 12:37:02 pm PDT #2181 of 6690
Life moves pretty fast. You don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.
I know I'm late to the party, but I am finally caught up from my trip and I'd love to read it, Allyson. I am home tomorrow and will have time if you care to send it my way.
Allyson - Sep 12, 2009 1:10:19 pm PDT #2182 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
Scrappy, insent with thanks! Ginger, got it with thanks!
Laura - Sep 12, 2009 1:36:08 pm PDT #2183 of 6690
Our wings are not tired.
First chance to sit and read today, finally. 2/3 through and the short version is that I am so delighted to meet and know Sam. Back to reading.....
Oh, the boys are reading too. Brendon asked if there were drugs. Bobby asked if there were guns. I told them both they were clearly switched at birth.
More later.
Laura - Sep 12, 2009 3:35:28 pm PDT #2184 of 6690
Our wings are not tired.
popcorn:
insent Allyson
Allyson - Sep 12, 2009 3:59:24 pm PDT #2185 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
Just read it, and agree with you on the stickiness of the vampire bat chapter. Loved your feedback! So happy.
Laura - Sep 12, 2009 4:14:08 pm PDT #2186 of 6690
Our wings are not tired.
Re-reading for more coherent details on that. I read through quickly just jotting quick notes so as to not interrupt the flow. The rhythm and flow from chapter to chapter was so smooth and the transitions very clever. Going back now on that chapter to see why I didn't think it flowed as well.
Allyson, you have a wonderful talent for telling a story. I felt like a little kid sitting at your feet listening to tales with eyes wide open.
Back to re-read and get all nit picky again!