Spike: You pissed in the Big Man's Chair? That's fantastic! Gunn: Spike, can you please turn off that warm fuzzy? Spike: What, the Lorne thing? Worn off. I just think that's bloody fabulous.

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The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

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Gudanov - Jun 02, 2009 10:15:19 am PDT #1644 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

The best place to look for information like that is actually books themselves -- who publishes fantasy, first, and then you go to their web sites and see how many new books they have coming out each month, who's doing straight fantasy, who does darker urban fantasy, that kind of thing.

Thanks for the advice. I'll probably be doing that after writing 9 more chapters, writing a good number of revisions I already know about, and fixing an obscene number of punctuation errors.


Gudanov - Jun 03, 2009 5:35:18 am PDT #1645 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I'm now a good ways into Chapter 19 and up to 107k words. I just might be able to finish Chapter 19 tonight. My outline says just 9 chapters after that.


Gudanov - Jun 04, 2009 5:47:42 am PDT #1646 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Chapter 19 is done. It will need a bit of work, but not too bad. I'm now about a page into Chapter 20. Moving along.


Gudanov - Jun 05, 2009 5:30:08 am PDT #1647 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Now about 1700 words into chapter 20. After revising my high level outline, it looks like it will be 28 chapters and a brief epilogue.


Liese S. - Jun 05, 2009 9:50:57 am PDT #1648 of 6690
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Doing great! Keep at it!


Typo Boy - Jun 05, 2009 10:40:13 am PDT #1649 of 6690
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

I know "ongepatshket" is a very obscure Yiddish expression. But is it clear enough from context to be OK in the following context?

We have ongepatshket our forests to the point we must clear brush from some of them or they will act as tinder, converting small fires to big ones."

Or is use of obscure dialect too distracting even if people can figure it out from context?


SailAweigh - Jun 05, 2009 10:42:04 am PDT #1650 of 6690
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Maybe if it was easier to pronounce, typo. I stumble over it so badly, I lose all sense of the sentence afterward.


Scrappy - Jun 05, 2009 10:42:19 am PDT #1651 of 6690
Life moves pretty fast. You don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.

I know the expression, but if I didn't, I think I would find that usage off-putting. Just having to sound it out in my head was a distraction.


Typo Boy - Jun 05, 2009 10:43:33 am PDT #1652 of 6690
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

OK, that makes sense. Out it goes. (Really, when I wonder "should I keep this", I should remember that if I have to ask the answer is almost certainly "No".)


Burrell - Jun 05, 2009 10:43:48 am PDT #1653 of 6690
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!

I suspect you are asking because you think it's too obscure. In which case it's too obscure.