Part of Kay is saying "Don't make it too easy for him to go off with another girl." Another part is saying "Oh, yes,Anything!" and it looks like that part is gonna win. But she can't let it show. He will enjoy it too much and start acting like a total bahstard. And she can't do it to Joyce.
Sometimes doing the right thing sucks. No wonder Timmy is always so damn miserable.
She proffers the cuffs. "Guard these with your...no, that's not enough...with my life. Cause if I lose 'em, it's my ass."
He grins. "Well, maybe you won't get them back, ever."
She sighs. "Stop it. I'll be back to collect the cuffs at five. Little hand on the five, big hand on the twelve. Be finished and dressed...there are limits to my friendship, huh?"
"What are you going to do if I don't? Lock me up? You'd bloody well love that!"
"Don't tempt me. You want 'em, or not?" You have no idea.
"Yeah, sure."
"That's plenty of time. Pace yourself," And she hands city property to the hot delinquent.
But she can't let it show. He will enjoy it too much and start acting like a total bahstard. And she can't do it to Joyce.
(thud)
"Don't tempt me. You want 'em, or not?" You have no idea.
Suggestion here: move the "You have no idea" to the middle. I think it would read just right as:
"Don't tempt me." You have no idea. "You want 'em, or not?"
For those who care, the first half of Ethan and Giles in the Far East hunting the Chinese Slayer is up
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I appear to be writing Spander.
Oh, as usual, dear.
connie! and shrift! bookmarked! can't get to livejournal here. Argh. Must wait till Saturday. Don't wanna!
Poor Kay. She never gets to play.
I do believe erika should get Kay into bed with Ripper and maybe even Joyce...
shrift! SNARF!
Lovin' the Spander. Makes me want to go play pool in a demon bar...
Is anyone willing to beta 17,200-odd words of strange Smallville fic? I've written it, it's got a beginning, a middle, and an ending, but I'm a little at loss to know if it's worth anyone's while reading or not.
And Cindy, I wish I could put this on TV...I could not do worse than 95% of the writers. Maybe someday. One rule: No chick parts. No women that exist to rub the hero's shoulders and chop zucchini....they could do that, but not as a life goal. Someday.
95%? You're underestimating yourself. Seriously (I'm not saying this in the all-Buffistas-are-foamy way), think about what's good on TV--that is--think of television programs. I'm not giving TV credit for films (particularly those of the 40s, but I digress).
Not really here. No really, I'm not. I just snuck in to catch up in the short threads and I'm missing all of you so fierce, I just had to speak up and tell you I love this discussion, and I love you guys for having it.
Beverly and I are one. I have only a little time, 'til Ben wakes up. I'm in danger of being eaten by boxes, but I miss my Buffistas.
