I'd like to look at pictures of pretty Kristin, you bet.
No. You're missing the point. The design of the thing is functional. The plan is not to shoot you. The plan is to get the girl. If there's no girl, then the plan, well, is like the room.
Early ,'Objects In Space'
The Great Write Way
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Amy - Jan 01, 2005 4:35:44 pm PST #9103 of 10001
Because books.
Pix - Jan 01, 2005 4:38:58 pm PST #9104 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.
Thanks!
link removed -- thanks everyone!
(also x-posted to my LJ, which is supposed to be about me)
SailAweigh - Jan 01, 2005 4:39:46 pm PST #9105 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Oooh, Krispics, I'll ogle.
Susan W. - Jan 01, 2005 4:47:21 pm PST #9106 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
I think I like the very first one best, Kristin. It's direct and dignified, but with a nice hint of the playful/coy, too.
No takers on the beta-ing? I promise I'm not the weepy sensitive mess I was this morning. It's just the first six pages of Anna, up to my first POV shift, and I want to know if it's a decent hook and intro to the characters.
Amy - Jan 01, 2005 4:48:05 pm PST #9107 of 10001
Because books.
They're all adorable, but I'll vote for numbers 4, 6, and 8. Very foamy indeed.
Amy - Jan 01, 2005 4:48:44 pm PST #9108 of 10001
Because books.
Poptarts:
Susan, I'll do it! I forgot you'd posted that.
Pix - Jan 01, 2005 4:50:02 pm PST #9109 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.
Susan, if you just want a very quick response, I'd be happy to. I don't have time tonight for a thorough beta...would that still be okay?
(And thanks for the feedback, everyone.)
Hil R. - Jan 01, 2005 4:50:39 pm PST #9110 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l
I like the last one and number 8.
Susan W. - Jan 01, 2005 4:52:14 pm PST #9111 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
Insent to your profiles, Amy and Kristin.
SailAweigh - Jan 01, 2005 4:58:03 pm PST #9112 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
I like 1 and 8 best. Although, 10 shows off your cheekbones very well and I like it just for that.