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A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
I think I like the very first one best, Kristin. It's direct and dignified, but with a nice hint of the playful/coy, too.
No takers on the beta-ing? I promise I'm not the weepy sensitive mess I was this morning. It's just the first six pages of Anna, up to my first POV shift, and I want to know if it's a decent hook and intro to the characters.
They're all adorable, but I'll vote for numbers 4, 6, and 8. Very foamy indeed.
Poptarts:
Susan, I'll do it! I forgot you'd posted that.
Susan, if you just want a very quick response, I'd be happy to. I don't have time tonight for a thorough beta...would that still be okay?
(And thanks for the feedback, everyone.)
I like the last one and number 8.
Insent to your profiles, Amy and Kristin.
I like 1 and 8 best. Although, 10 shows off your cheekbones very well and I like it just for that.
Susan, backflung.
Susan, backsent.
In terms of the pictures, it looks like #8 is a common thread. That's so funny; it was one of the ones I was least fond of!
Hee. Personally, I like #1 the best for the reasons Susan mentioned.
Gah. I don't know. It's so hard to look at any of these objectively.
I like number 8 for this purpose. It's attractive but serious.