Oooh, Krispics, I'll ogle.
Well, it's just good to know that when the chips are down and things look grim you'll feed off the girl who loves you to save your own ass!
Xander ,'Chosen'
The Great Write Way
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
SailAweigh - Jan 01, 2005 4:39:46 pm PST #9105 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Susan W. - Jan 01, 2005 4:47:21 pm PST #9106 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
I think I like the very first one best, Kristin. It's direct and dignified, but with a nice hint of the playful/coy, too.
No takers on the beta-ing? I promise I'm not the weepy sensitive mess I was this morning. It's just the first six pages of Anna, up to my first POV shift, and I want to know if it's a decent hook and intro to the characters.
Amy - Jan 01, 2005 4:48:05 pm PST #9107 of 10001
Because books.
They're all adorable, but I'll vote for numbers 4, 6, and 8. Very foamy indeed.
Amy - Jan 01, 2005 4:48:44 pm PST #9108 of 10001
Because books.
Poptarts:
Susan, I'll do it! I forgot you'd posted that.
Pix - Jan 01, 2005 4:50:02 pm PST #9109 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.
Susan, if you just want a very quick response, I'd be happy to. I don't have time tonight for a thorough beta...would that still be okay?
(And thanks for the feedback, everyone.)
Hil R. - Jan 01, 2005 4:50:39 pm PST #9110 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l
I like the last one and number 8.
Susan W. - Jan 01, 2005 4:52:14 pm PST #9111 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
Insent to your profiles, Amy and Kristin.
SailAweigh - Jan 01, 2005 4:58:03 pm PST #9112 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
I like 1 and 8 best. Although, 10 shows off your cheekbones very well and I like it just for that.
Amy - Jan 01, 2005 5:07:17 pm PST #9113 of 10001
Because books.
Susan, backflung.
Pix - Jan 01, 2005 5:07:56 pm PST #9114 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.
Susan, backsent.
In terms of the pictures, it looks like #8 is a common thread. That's so funny; it was one of the ones I was least fond of!
Hee. Personally, I like #1 the best for the reasons Susan mentioned.
Gah. I don't know. It's so hard to look at any of these objectively.