Thanks!
link removed -- thanks everyone!
(also x-posted to my LJ, which is supposed to be about me)
It's like, in the middle of all this, I'm paranoid that you'll think I don't like poetry.
Buffy ,'Empty Places'
The Great Write Way
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Pix - Jan 01, 2005 4:38:58 pm PST #9104 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie
SailAweigh - Jan 01, 2005 4:39:46 pm PST #9105 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Oooh, Krispics, I'll ogle.
Susan W. - Jan 01, 2005 4:47:21 pm PST #9106 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
I think I like the very first one best, Kristin. It's direct and dignified, but with a nice hint of the playful/coy, too.
No takers on the beta-ing? I promise I'm not the weepy sensitive mess I was this morning. It's just the first six pages of Anna, up to my first POV shift, and I want to know if it's a decent hook and intro to the characters.
Amy - Jan 01, 2005 4:48:05 pm PST #9107 of 10001
Because books.
They're all adorable, but I'll vote for numbers 4, 6, and 8. Very foamy indeed.
Amy - Jan 01, 2005 4:48:44 pm PST #9108 of 10001
Because books.
Poptarts:
Susan, I'll do it! I forgot you'd posted that.
Pix - Jan 01, 2005 4:50:02 pm PST #9109 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie
Susan, if you just want a very quick response, I'd be happy to. I don't have time tonight for a thorough beta...would that still be okay?
(And thanks for the feedback, everyone.)
Hil R. - Jan 01, 2005 4:50:39 pm PST #9110 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l
I like the last one and number 8.
Susan W. - Jan 01, 2005 4:52:14 pm PST #9111 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
Insent to your profiles, Amy and Kristin.
SailAweigh - Jan 01, 2005 4:58:03 pm PST #9112 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
I like 1 and 8 best. Although, 10 shows off your cheekbones very well and I like it just for that.
Amy - Jan 01, 2005 5:07:17 pm PST #9113 of 10001
Because books.
Susan, backflung.