insent both. I think this is the last of the "short enough to ask for a beta reader" essays for a long while. I appreciated all the help so much!
Tact is just not saying true stuff. I'll pass.
Cordelia ,'Dirty Girls'
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Allyson - Sep 09, 2004 3:24:42 pm PDT #6486 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
deborah grabien - Sep 09, 2004 3:37:19 pm PDT #6487 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Allyson, backsent, with a second look to follow later tonight.
I've got writers group tonight. Usually a pleasure. Tonight, I'm about as antisocial as I've ever been. Not looking forward to smalltalk over pasta this evening, at all.
Beverly - Sep 09, 2004 3:38:24 pm PDT #6488 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Back to you, Allyson.
Polter-Cow - Sep 09, 2004 4:58:14 pm PDT #6489 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!
If you need another reader, I'm here.
Allyson - Sep 09, 2004 6:17:37 pm PDT #6490 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
insent, P-C. Thanks deb and Beverly.
Pix - Sep 09, 2004 6:21:31 pm PDT #6491 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.
Also available for a beta read, if needed.
Hil R. - Sep 09, 2004 6:27:01 pm PDT #6492 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l
I can also beta read, if you need anyone else.
Allyson - Sep 09, 2004 6:31:02 pm PDT #6493 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
thank you both!
Pix - Sep 09, 2004 6:37:44 pm PDT #6494 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.
Received and read Allyson--it may be a bit before backflung depending on the level of response you're seeking.
Do you mind if I add comments and track changes, or would you rather just get a short narrative response?
Also, just as an initial thought, lots of good stuff there. It's a very enjoyable read.
Polter-Cow - Sep 09, 2004 6:38:32 pm PDT #6495 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!
Backflung like a sack of dung.
Okay, maybe that wasn't the best rhyme.