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Pix - Sep 09, 2004 6:37:44 pm PDT #6494 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

Received and read Allyson--it may be a bit before backflung depending on the level of response you're seeking.

Do you mind if I add comments and track changes, or would you rather just get a short narrative response?

Also, just as an initial thought, lots of good stuff there. It's a very enjoyable read.

Polter-Cow - Sep 09, 2004 6:38:32 pm PDT #6495 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Backflung like a sack of dung.

Okay, maybe that wasn't the best rhyme.

Hil R. - Sep 09, 2004 6:46:36 pm PDT #6496 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l

Received, Allyson. I'm having computer issues and it won't let me open it, though, so I might not be able to give comments until tomorrow.

Hil R. - Sep 09, 2004 6:55:10 pm PDT #6497 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l

OK, got my computer to cooperate. I'll reply soon.

Hil R. - Sep 09, 2004 8:00:10 pm PDT #6498 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l

Allyson, backflung.

deborah grabien - Sep 09, 2004 8:04:58 pm PDT #6499 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Allyson, humongously detailed insent. Let me know if it's too much.

Beverly - Sep 09, 2004 8:08:09 pm PDT #6500 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

And a short one from me, Allyson.

Pix - Sep 09, 2004 8:10:19 pm PDT #6501 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

Backflung, but only somewhat. Detail tomorrow.

Allyson - Sep 09, 2004 8:11:07 pm PDT #6502 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Thanks, Hil! That was very helpful.

Hil R. - Sep 09, 2004 8:18:50 pm PDT #6503 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l

Thanks, Hil! That was very helpful.

Oh, good. I always feel like I'm going too grammar-psycho when beta-reading.

I liked a lot of the imagery you had in there.

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