Allyson, backsent, with a second look to follow later tonight.
I've got writers group tonight. Usually a pleasure. Tonight, I'm about as antisocial as I've ever been. Not looking forward to smalltalk over pasta this evening, at all.
Time for some thrilling heroics.
Jayne ,'The Train Job'
The Great Write Way
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
deborah grabien - Sep 09, 2004 3:37:19 pm PDT #6487 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Beverly - Sep 09, 2004 3:38:24 pm PDT #6488 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Back to you, Allyson.
Polter-Cow - Sep 09, 2004 4:58:14 pm PDT #6489 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!
If you need another reader, I'm here.
Allyson - Sep 09, 2004 6:17:37 pm PDT #6490 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
insent, P-C. Thanks deb and Beverly.
Pix - Sep 09, 2004 6:21:31 pm PDT #6491 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.
Also available for a beta read, if needed.
Hil R. - Sep 09, 2004 6:27:01 pm PDT #6492 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l
I can also beta read, if you need anyone else.
Allyson - Sep 09, 2004 6:31:02 pm PDT #6493 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
thank you both!
Pix - Sep 09, 2004 6:37:44 pm PDT #6494 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.
Received and read Allyson--it may be a bit before backflung depending on the level of response you're seeking.
Do you mind if I add comments and track changes, or would you rather just get a short narrative response?
Also, just as an initial thought, lots of good stuff there. It's a very enjoyable read.
Polter-Cow - Sep 09, 2004 6:38:32 pm PDT #6495 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!
Backflung like a sack of dung.
Okay, maybe that wasn't the best rhyme.
Hil R. - Sep 09, 2004 6:46:36 pm PDT #6496 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l
Received, Allyson. I'm having computer issues and it won't let me open it, though, so I might not be able to give comments until tomorrow.