I've really got to learn to just do the damage and get out of town. It's the 'stay and gloat' that gets me every time.

Ethan Rayne ,'Potential'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Polter-Cow - Sep 09, 2004 4:58:14 pm PDT #6489 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

If you need another reader, I'm here.


Allyson - Sep 09, 2004 6:17:37 pm PDT #6490 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

insent, P-C. Thanks deb and Beverly.


Pix - Sep 09, 2004 6:21:31 pm PDT #6491 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

Also available for a beta read, if needed.


Hil R. - Sep 09, 2004 6:27:01 pm PDT #6492 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l

I can also beta read, if you need anyone else.


Allyson - Sep 09, 2004 6:31:02 pm PDT #6493 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

thank you both!


Pix - Sep 09, 2004 6:37:44 pm PDT #6494 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

Received and read Allyson--it may be a bit before backflung depending on the level of response you're seeking.

Do you mind if I add comments and track changes, or would you rather just get a short narrative response?

Also, just as an initial thought, lots of good stuff there. It's a very enjoyable read.


Polter-Cow - Sep 09, 2004 6:38:32 pm PDT #6495 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Backflung like a sack of dung.

Okay, maybe that wasn't the best rhyme.


Hil R. - Sep 09, 2004 6:46:36 pm PDT #6496 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l

Received, Allyson. I'm having computer issues and it won't let me open it, though, so I might not be able to give comments until tomorrow.


Hil R. - Sep 09, 2004 6:55:10 pm PDT #6497 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l

OK, got my computer to cooperate. I'll reply soon.


Hil R. - Sep 09, 2004 8:00:10 pm PDT #6498 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l

Allyson, backflung.