This is my boat. They're part of my crew. No one's getting left. Best you get used to that.

Mal ,'Ariel'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Beverly - Sep 09, 2004 3:38:24 pm PDT #6488 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Back to you, Allyson.


Polter-Cow - Sep 09, 2004 4:58:14 pm PDT #6489 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

If you need another reader, I'm here.


Allyson - Sep 09, 2004 6:17:37 pm PDT #6490 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

insent, P-C. Thanks deb and Beverly.


Pix - Sep 09, 2004 6:21:31 pm PDT #6491 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

Also available for a beta read, if needed.


Hil R. - Sep 09, 2004 6:27:01 pm PDT #6492 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l

I can also beta read, if you need anyone else.


Allyson - Sep 09, 2004 6:31:02 pm PDT #6493 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

thank you both!


Pix - Sep 09, 2004 6:37:44 pm PDT #6494 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

Received and read Allyson--it may be a bit before backflung depending on the level of response you're seeking.

Do you mind if I add comments and track changes, or would you rather just get a short narrative response?

Also, just as an initial thought, lots of good stuff there. It's a very enjoyable read.


Polter-Cow - Sep 09, 2004 6:38:32 pm PDT #6495 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Backflung like a sack of dung.

Okay, maybe that wasn't the best rhyme.


Hil R. - Sep 09, 2004 6:46:36 pm PDT #6496 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l

Received, Allyson. I'm having computer issues and it won't let me open it, though, so I might not be able to give comments until tomorrow.


Hil R. - Sep 09, 2004 6:55:10 pm PDT #6497 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l

OK, got my computer to cooperate. I'll reply soon.