Home schooling? You know, it's not just for scary religious people anymore.

Buffy ,'Beneath You'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Amy - Nov 14, 2011 7:30:02 am PST #4868 of 6690
Because books.

It just seems like something that has been done before, at least the bored muse part. Sorry.

No need to apologize! That's what I need to know!


JenP - Nov 14, 2011 7:32:53 am PST #4869 of 6690

I love #3, especially for the possibilities of a point of view book from each triplet -- that has so much awesome potential for coolness and crossover and different angles on the same event or events. And an intriguing world I know little about.

I like #1, too, because I enjoy seeing a person dumped into an unfamiliar way of existing in the world -- either the world has changed or they have (Buck Rogers in the 25th Century! Sleeper! Gods who lose their powers!).

#2 appeals the least to me, I think maybe just because the two characters both sound like they'd be cranky at first, which is kind of silly of me, but that's all I can come up with for why it appeals less than the other two.

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I have to start writing. I'm so stressed about finances right now, that it's eating my brain. I see the light at the end of the tunnel, yay, but getting from here to there seems fraught right now. So, I am both anxious when thinking about it and anxious when trying to do anything else because I'm not thinking about it. Of course, what I really need to do on all fronts is take action.


Amy - Nov 14, 2011 7:35:18 am PST #4870 of 6690
Because books.

Maybe combine the two, Jen? Journal about the anxieties or even the steps you could in between now and then?


JenP - Nov 14, 2011 7:46:26 am PST #4871 of 6690

That's a great idea, Amy. Maybe that's my best use of Nano right now. Huh. Seems so logical now that someone thought of it for me. Maybe I need to just borrow other people's brain power right now until my own starts functioning again. Thanks!


Amy - Nov 14, 2011 7:48:40 am PST #4872 of 6690
Because books.

You can borrow my brain whenever you like, for what it's worth. (Which might not be much, just to warn you.)


Allyson - Nov 14, 2011 7:50:09 am PST #4873 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

I'm trying to plow through the proposal and clean up essays for my December 1 deadline. I need to add to/polish the essay on the sleezy motivational speaker and the rock bonding, as it's a good complement to first/introductory essay. But I keep falling back on Me and Chuck D, a piece on how Public Enemy got me through a science conference when i felt very small and stupid.

I think it's because I feel very small and stupid right now, instead of the usual righteous indignation. I don't have a lot of time. I need to focus.


Tom Scola - Nov 14, 2011 7:51:31 am PST #4874 of 6690
Remember that the frontier of the Rebellion is everywhere. And even the smallest act of insurrection pushes our lines forward.

Maybe #2 would be more interesting from the POV of the selkie?


Amy - Nov 14, 2011 8:00:29 am PST #4875 of 6690
Because books.

Tom, I hadn't thought of that. I'm not sure it would work, but it's worth thinking about it.

Allyson, do you want some feedback on the motivational speaker/rock essay? I'm happy to help.


Allyson - Nov 14, 2011 8:17:28 am PST #4876 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

It's really a wreck of random tangents. Overwrought. I need to dial it back. I can't get over the whole, "DO YOU KNOW WHERE YOU ARE RIGHT NOW?" aspect of it. I found his whole schtick to be so disrespectful of my workplace, and I spend far too much time in the piece raking him over the coals in such a blunt force way when what I really need is a scalpel and a steady hand.

I sound more like a cult member defending Dear Leader than I really want or mean. It's sloppy. And it's because I'm losing the humor/irony of having this Tony Robbins-like The Secret hawking snake oil salesman being paid to inspire people working at a science institution. Instead I'm just disturbed.


Amy - Nov 14, 2011 8:21:56 am PST #4877 of 6690
Because books.

If you want suggestions about what's worth keeping -- or just fresh eyes -- you know where I am.