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The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Gudanov - Feb 26, 2010 5:23:17 am PST #3107 of 6692
Coding and Sleeping

Not a lot of progress on 55, work is still getting in the way. I hope I can start making progress soon, I want to get done so I can get onto the next revision. Then the contest will begin, cuts vs. expanding into scenes, will the word count go up or down. Will trying to better define characters cost words or not? Will trying to better establish the setting cost words or not, I really need to do it through scenes and little bits of dialogue so it has the potential to cost words. If word count goes up, I stick with the two-book strategy. If word count goes down, I revert to the one-book strategy. I shall see.


erikaj - Feb 26, 2010 9:06:22 am PST #3108 of 6692
Always Anti-fascist!

Seska, I saw that, in one of my meanders through the internets. It was interesting.

  • Major* rewrites this morning...I'm not getting more specific because you probably don't care how many pages I "threw out" although I saved it as version 3, so version 2 is still in there, in case, well, in case, whatever. But I had to change it cause I thought I was getting too...gag oriented, you know...thinking "People love it/I love it when the agent and his wife bicker...absolutely must have that!" When really the true heart of the story is a movie star, his BFF, and their great love...oops forgot which forum I was in for a moment, and I'm not a slasher. But that subtext could have a place set for it like Elijah on Passover.


Stephanie - Feb 27, 2010 11:12:09 am PST #3109 of 6692
Trust my rage

I was at Border's today and this guy at a table stopped me. Iw as trying to avoid him, but then he started telling me that the book he had on the table was his novel, his third, and it made me start thinking about all my wonderful Buffista authors, and how hard you all work, and so I bought a book. I'll probably read it, since I bought it, although I'm not sure it's my type. But maybe it will be awesome, so there's that.


Gudanov - Mar 01, 2010 7:10:57 am PST #3110 of 6692
Coding and Sleeping

I'm still plugging away on 55. I got it done, but my wife thought I got one of the characters wrong and I saw her point. So more rewriting. I expect this section will need more massaging in the next revision. I hope to get past it this week.

I've started to read your script erika, though I'm not far enough in for opinions yet.


Allyson - Mar 01, 2010 7:34:45 am PST #3111 of 6692
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Sam has some interest from a couple of publishers, but I'm not putting any eggs in any baskets and trying to remain zen.


Gudanov - Mar 01, 2010 7:45:26 am PST #3112 of 6692
Coding and Sleeping

Good Luck!


Allyson - Mar 01, 2010 7:46:44 am PST #3113 of 6692
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Thanks! *zen*


Beverly - Mar 01, 2010 7:48:59 am PST #3114 of 6692
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Ohhmmmm. (zenning with Allyson and Sam)


Barb - Mar 01, 2010 9:00:18 am PST #3115 of 6692
“Not dead yet!”

So, got bitch-slapped with a new story idea (before I've finished the last MS) last week. After lots of hemming and hawing and whinging about how scary and different and did I mention scary? it is, I'm diving in, feet first.

Even compiled a soundtrack, which is the surest sign of my intent.

Wish me luck.


Beverly - Mar 01, 2010 10:45:40 am PST #3116 of 6692
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Good luck, Barb!