Captain was looking for a pilot. I found a husband. Seemed to work out.

Zoe ,'Bushwhacked'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Gudanov - Sep 11, 2009 9:42:58 am PDT #2176 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I will try to get through more by tomorrow evening. I won't be able to get through it all. I'm a bit over-committed at the moment.


Allyson - Sep 11, 2009 6:18:12 pm PDT #2177 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Gud, I just appreciate anything at all, really. Thanks for helping me.


Burrell - Sep 11, 2009 7:29:03 pm PDT #2178 of 6690
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!

I have it Allyson but I've been waylaid by illness. I can get to it this weekend. Plus I plan on sharing with the kids.


Allyson - Sep 12, 2009 11:12:13 am PDT #2179 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Loving and appreciating the feedback so far!

I'm just so happy with it right now. Even if an editor doesn't buy it, I tried my hand at fiction, and did the best I could. I wrote a second book. Huzzuh.


Ginger - Sep 12, 2009 11:28:38 am PDT #2180 of 6690
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

I'm sending my right now.


Scrappy - Sep 12, 2009 12:37:02 pm PDT #2181 of 6690
Life moves pretty fast. You don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.

I know I'm late to the party, but I am finally caught up from my trip and I'd love to read it, Allyson. I am home tomorrow and will have time if you care to send it my way.


Allyson - Sep 12, 2009 1:10:19 pm PDT #2182 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Scrappy, insent with thanks! Ginger, got it with thanks!


Laura - Sep 12, 2009 1:36:08 pm PDT #2183 of 6690
Our wings are not tired.

First chance to sit and read today, finally. 2/3 through and the short version is that I am so delighted to meet and know Sam. Back to reading.....

Oh, the boys are reading too. Brendon asked if there were drugs. Bobby asked if there were guns. I told them both they were clearly switched at birth.

More later.


Laura - Sep 12, 2009 3:35:28 pm PDT #2184 of 6690
Our wings are not tired.

popcorn:

insent Allyson


Allyson - Sep 12, 2009 3:59:24 pm PDT #2185 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Just read it, and agree with you on the stickiness of the vampire bat chapter. Loved your feedback! So happy.