Not at all! I'm starved for feedback and will hand it all over to Kate on Sunday after a polish.
Ah, yes, of course. The gypsies, they gave you your soul. The gypsies are filthy people. Ptui! We shall speak of them no more.
Ilona Costa Bianchi ,'The Girl in Question'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Allyson - Sep 11, 2009 9:14:05 am PDT #2175 of 6734
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
Gudanov - Sep 11, 2009 9:42:58 am PDT #2176 of 6734
Coding and Sleeping
I will try to get through more by tomorrow evening. I won't be able to get through it all. I'm a bit over-committed at the moment.
Allyson - Sep 11, 2009 6:18:12 pm PDT #2177 of 6734
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
Gud, I just appreciate anything at all, really. Thanks for helping me.
Burrell - Sep 11, 2009 7:29:03 pm PDT #2178 of 6734
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!
I have it Allyson but I've been waylaid by illness. I can get to it this weekend. Plus I plan on sharing with the kids.
Allyson - Sep 12, 2009 11:12:13 am PDT #2179 of 6734
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
Loving and appreciating the feedback so far!
I'm just so happy with it right now. Even if an editor doesn't buy it, I tried my hand at fiction, and did the best I could. I wrote a second book. Huzzuh.
Ginger - Sep 12, 2009 11:28:38 am PDT #2180 of 6734
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda
I'm sending my right now.
Scrappy - Sep 12, 2009 12:37:02 pm PDT #2181 of 6734
Life moves pretty fast. You don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.
I know I'm late to the party, but I am finally caught up from my trip and I'd love to read it, Allyson. I am home tomorrow and will have time if you care to send it my way.
Allyson - Sep 12, 2009 1:10:19 pm PDT #2182 of 6734
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
Scrappy, insent with thanks! Ginger, got it with thanks!
Laura - Sep 12, 2009 1:36:08 pm PDT #2183 of 6734
Our wings are not tired.
First chance to sit and read today, finally. 2/3 through and the short version is that I am so delighted to meet and know Sam. Back to reading.....
Oh, the boys are reading too. Brendon asked if there were drugs. Bobby asked if there were guns. I told them both they were clearly switched at birth.
More later.
Laura - Sep 12, 2009 3:35:28 pm PDT #2184 of 6734
Our wings are not tired.
popcorn:
insent Allyson