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'Serenity'

The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.

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Allyson - Sep 11, 2009 8:23:24 am PDT #2173 of 6690

Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Please pass my thanks on to Emaryn, Gud! I love my young beta readers. Vague comments are very useful. At ten, she might be a little too old for Sam, I think my target is 2nd grade readers (though, honestly, I'm unsure what that really means).

Whoot!

Ginger - Sep 11, 2009 8:32:45 am PDT #2174 of 6690

"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

I'm reading away, Allyson. Will tonight be too late?

Allyson - Sep 11, 2009 9:14:05 am PDT #2175 of 6690

Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Not at all! I'm starved for feedback and will hand it all over to Kate on Sunday after a polish.

Gudanov - Sep 11, 2009 9:42:58 am PDT #2176 of 6690

Coding and Sleeping

I will try to get through more by tomorrow evening. I won't be able to get through it all. I'm a bit over-committed at the moment.

Allyson - Sep 11, 2009 6:18:12 pm PDT #2177 of 6690

Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Gud, I just appreciate anything at all, really. Thanks for helping me.

Burrell - Sep 11, 2009 7:29:03 pm PDT #2178 of 6690

Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!

I have it Allyson but I've been waylaid by illness. I can get to it this weekend. Plus I plan on sharing with the kids.

Allyson - Sep 12, 2009 11:12:13 am PDT #2179 of 6690

Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Loving and appreciating the feedback so far!

I'm just so happy with it right now. Even if an editor doesn't buy it, I tried my hand at fiction, and did the best I could. I wrote a second book. Huzzuh.

Ginger - Sep 12, 2009 11:28:38 am PDT #2180 of 6690

"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

I'm sending my right now.

Scrappy - Sep 12, 2009 12:37:02 pm PDT #2181 of 6690

Life moves pretty fast. You don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.

I know I'm late to the party, but I am finally caught up from my trip and I'd love to read it, Allyson. I am home tomorrow and will have time if you care to send it my way.

Allyson - Sep 12, 2009 1:10:19 pm PDT #2182 of 6690

Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Scrappy, insent with thanks! Ginger, got it with thanks!

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