Can't even shout, Can't even cry. The Gentlemen are coming by. Looking in windows, knocking on doors. They need to take seven, and they might take yours. Can't call to mom, can't say a word. You're gonna die screaming but you won't be heard.

Dream Girl ,'Bring On The Night'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Laura - Jul 16, 2009 5:26:53 am PDT #1842 of 6734
Our wings are not tired.

You should be excited. An incredible effort with other demands on your time. Congratulations!


Fay - Jul 16, 2009 5:54:12 am PDT #1843 of 6734
"Fuck Western ideologically-motivated gender identification!" Sulu gasped, and came.

::applauds::

BLOODY GOOD JOB, GUD!


-t - Jul 16, 2009 6:06:35 am PDT #1844 of 6734
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration

You have! Well done, Gud.


erikaj - Jul 16, 2009 11:30:47 am PDT #1845 of 6734
"Somewhere in this building is our talent." Toby Ziegler, my spirit animal

Yay, you.


Gudanov - Jul 17, 2009 11:36:48 am PDT #1846 of 6734
Coding and Sleeping

In one of the first acts of revision I nixed the name 'Elf' for one of the races. I'm very happy about this since it was more of a placeholder than a description of the race. I've got a name now that has two different meanings in Old High German and Swedish that are both appropriate to the race.


StuntHusband - Jul 17, 2009 11:44:30 am PDT #1847 of 6734
Electromagnetic candy! - Stark

Gudanov - is it impolite and improper to ask what word you went with? I, amateur philologist and linguist, am forced to ask. :)


Gudanov - Jul 17, 2009 11:49:00 am PDT #1848 of 6734
Coding and Sleeping

Here it is,

[link]


StuntHusband - Jul 17, 2009 12:12:14 pm PDT #1849 of 6734
Electromagnetic candy! - Stark

Oooo! That's NEW to me! Danke - vielen Danke! I'm seriously gleeful (and therefore seriously in need of help)


Gudanov - Jul 18, 2009 5:21:14 pm PDT #1850 of 6734
Coding and Sleeping

Chapter 1 will be a total loss. Pretty much as expected though. Chapter 2 will get axed pretty hard too. All for the best.


Gudanov - Jul 20, 2009 9:04:44 am PDT #1851 of 6734
Coding and Sleeping

I've started revising. I chopped off all the stuff that happened before the action in chapter 1 and I'm rewriting the action sequence itself. Chapter 2 shouldn't be quite as drastic as chapter 1, but it still will get mauled pretty badly. Chapter 3 should stay pretty intact.