Gunn: You ready? Fred: Is no an acceptable answer?

'Lineage'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Laura - Jul 16, 2009 5:26:53 am PDT #1842 of 6690
Our wings are not tired.

You should be excited. An incredible effort with other demands on your time. Congratulations!


Fay - Jul 16, 2009 5:54:12 am PDT #1843 of 6690
"Fuck Western ideologically-motivated gender identification!" Sulu gasped, and came.

::applauds::

BLOODY GOOD JOB, GUD!


-t - Jul 16, 2009 6:06:35 am PDT #1844 of 6690
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration

You have! Well done, Gud.


erikaj - Jul 16, 2009 11:30:47 am PDT #1845 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!

Yay, you.


Gudanov - Jul 17, 2009 11:36:48 am PDT #1846 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

In one of the first acts of revision I nixed the name 'Elf' for one of the races. I'm very happy about this since it was more of a placeholder than a description of the race. I've got a name now that has two different meanings in Old High German and Swedish that are both appropriate to the race.


StuntHusband - Jul 17, 2009 11:44:30 am PDT #1847 of 6690
Electromagnetic candy! - Stark

Gudanov - is it impolite and improper to ask what word you went with? I, amateur philologist and linguist, am forced to ask. :)


Gudanov - Jul 17, 2009 11:49:00 am PDT #1848 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Here it is,

[link]


StuntHusband - Jul 17, 2009 12:12:14 pm PDT #1849 of 6690
Electromagnetic candy! - Stark

Oooo! That's NEW to me! Danke - vielen Danke! I'm seriously gleeful (and therefore seriously in need of help)


Gudanov - Jul 18, 2009 5:21:14 pm PDT #1850 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Chapter 1 will be a total loss. Pretty much as expected though. Chapter 2 will get axed pretty hard too. All for the best.


Gudanov - Jul 20, 2009 9:04:44 am PDT #1851 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I've started revising. I chopped off all the stuff that happened before the action in chapter 1 and I'm rewriting the action sequence itself. Chapter 2 shouldn't be quite as drastic as chapter 1, but it still will get mauled pretty badly. Chapter 3 should stay pretty intact.