::applauds::
BLOODY GOOD JOB, GUD!
Yes. Men like sports. Men watch the action movie, they eat of the beef, and enjoy to look at the bosoms. A thousand years of avenging our wrongs and that's all you've learned?
Xander ,'End of Days'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Fay - Jul 16, 2009 5:54:12 am PDT #1843 of 6690
"Fuck Western ideologically-motivated gender identification!" Sulu gasped, and came.
-t - Jul 16, 2009 6:06:35 am PDT #1844 of 6690
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration
You have! Well done, Gud.
erikaj - Jul 16, 2009 11:30:47 am PDT #1845 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!
Yay, you.
Gudanov - Jul 17, 2009 11:36:48 am PDT #1846 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
In one of the first acts of revision I nixed the name 'Elf' for one of the races. I'm very happy about this since it was more of a placeholder than a description of the race. I've got a name now that has two different meanings in Old High German and Swedish that are both appropriate to the race.
StuntHusband - Jul 17, 2009 11:44:30 am PDT #1847 of 6690
Electromagnetic candy! - Stark
Gudanov - is it impolite and improper to ask what word you went with? I, amateur philologist and linguist, am forced to ask. :)
Gudanov - Jul 17, 2009 11:49:00 am PDT #1848 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
StuntHusband - Jul 17, 2009 12:12:14 pm PDT #1849 of 6690
Electromagnetic candy! - Stark
Oooo! That's NEW to me! Danke - vielen Danke! I'm seriously gleeful (and therefore seriously in need of help)
Gudanov - Jul 18, 2009 5:21:14 pm PDT #1850 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
Chapter 1 will be a total loss. Pretty much as expected though. Chapter 2 will get axed pretty hard too. All for the best.
Gudanov - Jul 20, 2009 9:04:44 am PDT #1851 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
I've started revising. I chopped off all the stuff that happened before the action in chapter 1 and I'm rewriting the action sequence itself. Chapter 2 shouldn't be quite as drastic as chapter 1, but it still will get mauled pretty badly. Chapter 3 should stay pretty intact.
Gudanov - Jul 21, 2009 4:44:52 am PDT #1852 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
I'm getting closer to revised chapter 1. However, partly that is because chapter 1 is shorter and a bit of it is pushed into chapter 2. It seems better to me. My wife says it is way better so far.