Can't even shout, Can't even cry. The Gentlemen are coming by. Looking in windows, knocking on doors. They need to take seven, and they might take yours. Can't call to mom, can't say a word. You're gonna die screaming but you won't be heard.

Dream Girl ,'Bring On The Night'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Deena - Apr 25, 2009 7:51:26 pm PDT #1488 of 6739
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

I'd love to send a newer version, if you don't mind. I've incorporated Anne's very helpful comments in this one.

Thanks, you!


Gudanov - Apr 26, 2009 12:47:50 pm PDT #1489 of 6739
Coding and Sleeping

And chapter 5 is done. There are some things I'd like to modify, but nothing too major. So onward to chapter 6. This puts me at about 37,000 words.


Gudanov - Apr 27, 2009 6:15:41 am PDT #1490 of 6739
Coding and Sleeping

I wrote about 1,000 words last night for chapter 6. I think that means I wrote 5,000 words Sunday. That was a good writing day. I was helped by having a couple of hours in the afternoon in addition to time at night.


SailAweigh - Apr 27, 2009 7:30:27 am PDT #1491 of 6739
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Dang, Gud. It can take me an hour to squeeze out 100 words for a drabble. I am astounded at your word count.


Gudanov - Apr 27, 2009 7:34:49 am PDT #1492 of 6739
Coding and Sleeping

That part had a lot of action. In those cases I can sometimes go almost as fast as I can type.


Gudanov - Apr 27, 2009 7:46:30 am PDT #1493 of 6739
Coding and Sleeping

I have a heist coming up which will really slow me down. I'll need to do a lot of planning and drawing of floor plans.


Amy - Apr 27, 2009 8:35:52 am PDT #1494 of 6739
Because books.

I think that means I wrote 5,000 words Sunday.

I need to write 6,000 words by THURSDAY, and I'm panicking. Damn.


Barb - Apr 27, 2009 8:40:51 am PDT #1495 of 6739
“Not dead yet!”

Deep breaths, babe.

Start with 1500.


Amy - Apr 27, 2009 8:42:25 am PDT #1496 of 6739
Because books.

Much of it will be ... fun stuff to write, though, so.

And I'm sure you know what I mean by that. Ahem.


Barb - Apr 27, 2009 8:47:09 am PDT #1497 of 6739
“Not dead yet!”

Ahem indeed, love.

So get to it.

(And what's it for?)