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Deena - Apr 24, 2009 11:18:01 pm PDT #1478 of 6690
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

That sounds like a huge book. I'm loving the play by play.

I wrote a thing. Greg said the ending was too abrupt, so I changed it. I didn't like the change, so I changed it back and sent it to Nick. Nick said there wasn't enough conflict and if I wasn't going to change it back again, I should at least get more conflict in the middle.

I changed it some more...but not quite the way either of them wanted me to change it... and I don't know if it's better or worse.

I'm wondering if anyone here would like to read it and comment? It's under 3k words.

Anne W. - Apr 25, 2009 2:06:07 am PDT #1479 of 6690
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Deena, I could take a look and get it back to you this evening. I'm going to be out and about through the morning/afternoon, but can look at it when I get back.

Deena - Apr 25, 2009 5:37:37 am PDT #1480 of 6690
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Thanks, Anne! I'll send it over. Whenever you have time is great.

Amy - Apr 25, 2009 6:03:13 am PDT #1481 of 6690
Because books.

Deena, I'm going to read it today! Promise!

Ginger - Apr 25, 2009 9:59:07 am PDT #1482 of 6690
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

Me too!

Deena - Apr 25, 2009 1:00:07 pm PDT #1483 of 6690
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Ginger, I emailed it to you last night, but a middle version. I'll send the most recent.

Anne W. - Apr 25, 2009 3:56:18 pm PDT #1484 of 6690
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Deena, insent w/ comments.

Barb - Apr 25, 2009 5:47:30 pm PDT #1485 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”

Deena, I've been gone since way, way early this morning, but I'm planning on reading tomorrow. If you have a more recent version, send, please?

Deena - Apr 25, 2009 6:50:29 pm PDT #1486 of 6690
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

I will, and thank you very much, Barb!

Amy - Apr 25, 2009 6:52:04 pm PDT #1487 of 6690
Because books.

Deena, do I have the most recent one? I have the one you sent on Thursday. Which I read, and will comment on, unless you want to send a newer version.

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