Riley: Maybe I should just let you rest. Buffy: You sure? I bet if you just lay down with me- Riley: Nothing you are about to say will lead to rest.

'Lessons'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


erikaj - Jan 12, 2009 9:33:34 am PST #1258 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!

Thanks, Typo Boy...yeah, that's me, the second coming of Leigh Brackett. I kid, but that is something of an ambition, well, since I learned who Leigh Brackett was. Don't need the mansion...maybe just a comely minion to pick up the stuff I drop. Maybe some limber young dude, so I can say, like Frank Pembleton, that I keep him around cause I like how it looks.


Connie Neil - Jan 16, 2009 8:29:43 am PST #1259 of 6690
brillig

So I'm reading some old fic of mine from my Equalizer days and being amused by the 80s-ness of it and pleased that the plots and characterization hold up. But my POV is all over the place. I bitch at people when I'm editing about POV, and it really annoys me when other writers can't keep POV straight. Still, when I've tried re-writing these stories, a focused POV just seems cramped. I'm not sure if it's "mustn't change my baby!" syndrome or a case of "follow what's right, not what the rules say."

So, what "rules" of writing do you find yourself chucking out the window when the muse insists? Or is your muse better trained than mine?


Beverly - Jan 16, 2009 8:52:47 am PST #1260 of 6690
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

I have *no* perspective on my stuff, and the longer I've worked at "perfecting" it, the less likely I am to spot something that needs changing, or to change it when a beta points it out.

Thus, three drawer novels. Any of which *could* be reworked into something potentially saleable. By anybody but me, because I can't see past what is to what could or should be changed for the better. ::shrug::


erikaj - Jan 16, 2009 7:09:56 pm PST #1261 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!

I don't think about it in terms of rules...maybe I should have.


Typo Boy - Jan 27, 2009 6:40:30 am PST #1262 of 6690
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Everything has that white glow again.
I've been shoveling snow again,
Calling Ma nature a Ho again.
Its nothing like being in love.


Toddson - Jan 27, 2009 7:53:16 am PST #1263 of 6690
Friends don't let friends read "Atlas Shrugged"

We have snow ... and the usual panic. silly people.


Typo Boy - Jan 27, 2009 8:05:23 am PST #1264 of 6690
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Try a 35 yard long driveway sloping steeply upward. Leading to a street that never gets plowed. You won't have much love for snow either. (Mind you if it only lasts a day or two, no problem. Past that I'm pretty much trapped even if I keep the drive shoveled. )


Toddson - Jan 27, 2009 8:23:02 am PST #1265 of 6690
Friends don't let friends read "Atlas Shrugged"

oh, no comment on you - just the people who when the first flakes show up get all panic-y.


Laga - Jan 27, 2009 9:12:50 am PST #1266 of 6690
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.

I miss the snow. I grew up on a cul-de-sac and the snow plow would sweep everything into a giant heap in the center and we would carve tunnels and play King of the Mountain until our toes went numb.


Typo Boy - Jan 27, 2009 4:43:13 pm PST #1267 of 6690
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

oh, no comment on you - just the people who when the first flakes show up get all panic-y.

No offense taken. Unfortunately at the moment those people are me. I felt pretty panicked at the first flakes this morning. "Will I be trapped for another five days. Will I be able to get back into my garage when I come back." Forturnately by the time I returned it had melted away. But at the moment, I have a visceral reaction to snow. I'm not scared of snow per se, but of the fact that this town is not really prepared for much of it.