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Buffy ,'Beneath You'


Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies  

Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.


Elena - Jul 12, 2003 8:12:34 am PDT #5075 of 10001
Thanks for all the fish.

Deena, how about if I change Wes' thinking about the crush to this -

Wes wished he could just ignore Andrew's crush, as Angel had Fred's, but that had ended so badly. "I'm just going to have to talk to the lad. Once I'm not so busy." He looked at his uncluttered desk. "Or maybe I'll ask Lorne to do it."


Deena - Jul 12, 2003 8:15:36 am PDT #5076 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Oh, I like that a lot.

Does Wes use lad? I think boy sounds more like him. I could be wrong.


Elena - Jul 12, 2003 8:17:56 am PDT #5077 of 10001
Thanks for all the fish.

boy it is.


Elena - Jul 12, 2003 8:25:36 am PDT #5078 of 10001
Thanks for all the fish.

Wouldn't Andrew know Monty Python? It's a particularly geeky phenomenon, seems to me. I would think he'd be, at the least, quoting some back, even if it were just from The Holy Grail, which is probably (I think?) the most well-known Monty Python. I buy that he wouldn't know it was a group -- I didn't (embarrassed now, yes). something like:

"Oh, oh, I know this! Killer Rabbit!" (or) Ni! Ni!"

I do almost exactly that here -

"Monty Python is not a person, it's the name of a troupe of comedians."

"Right, like that strange walking guy."

"Funny."

Because of the Ministry of Funny Walks. Andrew, as I see him, is more of a SF geek than a generalised geek. And I wonder if he's not a touch young to be very much into MP. I think he'd be more of a Red Dwarf and possibly Dr. Who geek.

Revised, based on your suggestions -

Wesley stared down at Andrew, utterly bemused.

"It's okay, Wesley." Andrew lifted a hand and patted a stubbled cheek comfortingly. "It's okay for a man to have a crush on another man."

"And what," Wesley thought, "am I to do with that?" He smiled and lowered his head to kiss Andrew, quite thoroughly.


Deena - Jul 12, 2003 8:29:29 am PDT #5079 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Ah, that was my monty python stupidity not getting it then. Cool. Nice revision. I like the word bemused. It seems particularly Wes.

edited because I liked the wrong form of the word.


Elena - Jul 12, 2003 8:31:41 am PDT #5080 of 10001
Thanks for all the fish.

I think that bemused - or baffled - would pretty much sum up Wesley's reaction to Andrew.


Deena - Jul 12, 2003 8:37:49 am PDT #5081 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

channeling fay or gobsmacked. It's a good story, Elena. I like it. I'm sorry for the pairing confusion. Did you write the other one, and if you did, are you going to post it?


Elena - Jul 12, 2003 8:42:58 am PDT #5082 of 10001
Thanks for all the fish.

I did write it, and I posted it upthread. It's the bucket story. And I like this one better.


Deena - Jul 12, 2003 9:06:20 am PDT #5083 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Oh, yeah, duh. I remember that one, and liked it very much.


Rebecca Lizard - Jul 12, 2003 9:34:00 am PDT #5084 of 10001
You sip / say it's your crazy / straw say it's you're crazy / as you bicycle your soul / with beauty in your basket

And I wonder if he's not a touch young to be very much into MP.

t meek

I'm younger than Andrew....

Seriously, I think Andrew would really know Monty Python. Everybody in my fifth-grade class knew them, I mean, in the way they knew if something was a Beatles song. It's just a mass-culture thing you knew.