If I do leg three of the Amanda trilogy
IF? I thought this was my reward for being good! Not that I'm doing so well at the good part.
signed,
typing with a baby all cockeyed in my arms
Wash ,'Bushwhacked'
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If I do leg three of the Amanda trilogy
IF? I thought this was my reward for being good! Not that I'm doing so well at the good part.
signed,
typing with a baby all cockeyed in my arms
No, there will be a third leg of the trilogy; it's when that's the issue.
Elena, "Launcher" has been my theme song since the Bushies took over. But I adore Cockburn; I think he's an incredible guitarist, I adore his voice, and his lyrics purely slay me. Then again, I'm half rocker/half angry old folkie.
I loves me some BNL too. I'm there whenever they play the Bay Area. One of the best bands in the business.
Okay, feeling relieved. I can do patient. It's on my list of things to do.
I like him more as a lyricist than a singer.
Argh. Having rewrite issues with two sentences.
Tackle #1 first: Theirs was a fragile peace, upset by Fred and never fully reassembled.
upset meaning apple cart way, of course, but...
looking for another way to say it.
"Theirs was a fragile peace. Its balance, unwittingly upset by Fred, had never been righted (reattained)."
Off the top of the head.
I'm working on "Weaver"....
upset by Fred and never fully reassembled.
You want the first bit to match the second. So - upset and righted (as deb suggested) or shattered and reassembled.
I vote "regained".
Hmm... Ruffled by Fred and never smoothed?
Punctured by Fred and never reinflated?
Massacred by Fred and never resurrected?
Severed by Fred and never reattached?
Smothered by Fred and never got CPR?
Withered in Fred's shadow and never brought into the light?