(clapping appreciatively)
I've really got to learn to just do the damage and get out of town. It's the 'stay and gloat' that gets me every time.
Ethan Rayne ,'Potential'
The Great Write Way
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
erikaj - Nov 06, 2003 2:01:03 pm PST #2624 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
Susan W. - Nov 06, 2003 2:16:12 pm PST #2625 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
Looks good to me.
Betsy HP - Nov 06, 2003 2:42:58 pm PST #2626 of 10001
If I only had a brain...
Lovely. One nit:
at the moment, they share their rambling Victorian house with thirteen of them.
The first "they" in this bit is Deb and Nic; the second "them" is cats.
At the moment, they share their rambling Victorian with thirteen felines. (Or "cats" if felines is too highfalutin'.)
Betsy HP - Nov 06, 2003 2:43:59 pm PST #2627 of 10001
If I only had a brain...
Oh, and you've got "history history".
Deena - Nov 06, 2003 3:21:23 pm PST #2628 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
I love it. I caught the history history as well, but my other question was, is the comma necessary in "writing, to really learn how to cook."
Beverly - Nov 06, 2003 4:05:38 pm PST #2629 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Brava! I want to know this woman. Depth and breadth and humor and brains, you betcha!
deborah grabien - Nov 06, 2003 5:56:56 pm PST #2630 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
(off to fix typos)
Sorry - I drove down to San Jose to feed the ferals in a blinding rainstorm, because Nic's sick.
After I fix the typos? I'm going to eat a really large piece of grilled meat.
edit: comma removed, double history now single history, and "thirteen of them" has become "thirteen of the feline persuasion."
Nilly - Nov 06, 2003 10:59:45 pm PST #2631 of 10001
Swouncing
Brava! I want to know this woman. Depth and breadth and humor and brains, you betcha!
What Beverly said.
Also, lots of 'go you!' and 'you can do it!' to the word-counters (the initials are a bit too complicated for me). It's Anne, Deena, Liese, Betsy, amych, Suela, erika, Theodosia and whom else did I miss? t /doesn't-really-have-anything-to-say lurker
deborah grabien - Nov 07, 2003 9:57:09 am PST #2632 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
I HAVE A BOOK!
Fed Ex just walked up the stairs and handed me a pre-mass copy of "Weaver" and it's fucking GORGEOUS!
(doing the happy dance)
Ten years, people. Forgot how cool it is to handle that first copy.
Steph L. - Nov 07, 2003 9:58:55 am PST #2633 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!
Deb, I don't even have words for how I excited I am for you!!!!!