Mal: I call you back? Wash: No, Mal. You didn't. Zoe: I take full responsibility, cap.

'Out Of Gas'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Betsy HP - Nov 06, 2003 2:42:58 pm PST #2626 of 10001
If I only had a brain...

Lovely. One nit:

at the moment, they share their rambling Victorian house with thirteen of them.

The first "they" in this bit is Deb and Nic; the second "them" is cats.

At the moment, they share their rambling Victorian with thirteen felines. (Or "cats" if felines is too highfalutin'.)


Betsy HP - Nov 06, 2003 2:43:59 pm PST #2627 of 10001
If I only had a brain...

Oh, and you've got "history history".


Deena - Nov 06, 2003 3:21:23 pm PST #2628 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

I love it. I caught the history history as well, but my other question was, is the comma necessary in "writing, to really learn how to cook."


Beverly - Nov 06, 2003 4:05:38 pm PST #2629 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Brava! I want to know this woman. Depth and breadth and humor and brains, you betcha!


deborah grabien - Nov 06, 2003 5:56:56 pm PST #2630 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

(off to fix typos)

Sorry - I drove down to San Jose to feed the ferals in a blinding rainstorm, because Nic's sick.

After I fix the typos? I'm going to eat a really large piece of grilled meat.

edit: comma removed, double history now single history, and "thirteen of them" has become "thirteen of the feline persuasion."


Nilly - Nov 06, 2003 10:59:45 pm PST #2631 of 10001
Swouncing

Brava! I want to know this woman. Depth and breadth and humor and brains, you betcha!

What Beverly said.

Also, lots of 'go you!' and 'you can do it!' to the word-counters (the initials are a bit too complicated for me). It's Anne, Deena, Liese, Betsy, amych, Suela, erika, Theodosia and whom else did I miss? t /doesn't-really-have-anything-to-say lurker


deborah grabien - Nov 07, 2003 9:57:09 am PST #2632 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I HAVE A BOOK!

Fed Ex just walked up the stairs and handed me a pre-mass copy of "Weaver" and it's fucking GORGEOUS!

(doing the happy dance)

Ten years, people. Forgot how cool it is to handle that first copy.


Steph L. - Nov 07, 2003 9:58:55 am PST #2633 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!

Deb, I don't even have words for how I excited I am for you!!!!!


erikaj - Nov 07, 2003 10:00:00 am PST #2634 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

So, you're saying you never forget the first time you touch it? Go You! And thanks, Nilly. But I stalled and watched coffinsex today. I feel guilty.


Astarte - Nov 07, 2003 10:01:23 am PST #2635 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.

Terrific, Deb. YAYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!