Looks good to me.
Sometimes I miss having powers... Oh. Oh! I know what this is! This is peer pressure! Any second now you're gonna make me smoke tobacco and--and have drugs!
Anya ,'Showtime'
The Great Write Way
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Susan W. - Nov 06, 2003 2:16:12 pm PST #2625 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
Betsy HP - Nov 06, 2003 2:42:58 pm PST #2626 of 10001
If I only had a brain...
Lovely. One nit:
at the moment, they share their rambling Victorian house with thirteen of them.
The first "they" in this bit is Deb and Nic; the second "them" is cats.
At the moment, they share their rambling Victorian with thirteen felines. (Or "cats" if felines is too highfalutin'.)
Betsy HP - Nov 06, 2003 2:43:59 pm PST #2627 of 10001
If I only had a brain...
Oh, and you've got "history history".
Deena - Nov 06, 2003 3:21:23 pm PST #2628 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
I love it. I caught the history history as well, but my other question was, is the comma necessary in "writing, to really learn how to cook."
Beverly - Nov 06, 2003 4:05:38 pm PST #2629 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Brava! I want to know this woman. Depth and breadth and humor and brains, you betcha!
deborah grabien - Nov 06, 2003 5:56:56 pm PST #2630 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
(off to fix typos)
Sorry - I drove down to San Jose to feed the ferals in a blinding rainstorm, because Nic's sick.
After I fix the typos? I'm going to eat a really large piece of grilled meat.
edit: comma removed, double history now single history, and "thirteen of them" has become "thirteen of the feline persuasion."
Nilly - Nov 06, 2003 10:59:45 pm PST #2631 of 10001
Swouncing
Brava! I want to know this woman. Depth and breadth and humor and brains, you betcha!
What Beverly said.
Also, lots of 'go you!' and 'you can do it!' to the word-counters (the initials are a bit too complicated for me). It's Anne, Deena, Liese, Betsy, amych, Suela, erika, Theodosia and whom else did I miss? t /doesn't-really-have-anything-to-say lurker
deborah grabien - Nov 07, 2003 9:57:09 am PST #2632 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
I HAVE A BOOK!
Fed Ex just walked up the stairs and handed me a pre-mass copy of "Weaver" and it's fucking GORGEOUS!
(doing the happy dance)
Ten years, people. Forgot how cool it is to handle that first copy.
Steph L. - Nov 07, 2003 9:58:55 am PST #2633 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!
Deb, I don't even have words for how I excited I am for you!!!!!
erikaj - Nov 07, 2003 10:00:00 am PST #2634 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
So, you're saying you never forget the first time you touch it? Go You! And thanks, Nilly. But I stalled and watched coffinsex today. I feel guilty.