Wesley: Feng Shui. Gunn: Right. What's that mean again? Wesley: That people will believe anything. Actually, in this place, Feng Shui will probably have enormous significance. I'll align my furniture the wrong way and suddenly catch fire or turn into a pudding.

'Conviction (1)'


Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?

This thread is for fanfic recs, links, and discussion, but not for actual posting of fanfic.


Calli - Dec 14, 2014 5:42:45 am PST #9221 of 10434
I must obey the inscrutable exhortations of my soul—Calvin and Hobbs

starting to feel hard bugles at their pants.

This makes me think of corn chips. [link] I'm pretty sure the author doesn't want me thinking about corn chips at that juncture. If one believes in authorial intent. Which, this far at least, I do.


Anne W. - Dec 14, 2014 11:03:56 am PST #9222 of 10434
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

starting to feel hard bugles at their pants.

Do they play Taps? Or would reveille be more appropriate given the circumstances?


Connie Neil - Dec 14, 2014 11:11:27 am PST #9223 of 10434
brillig

I'm hearing that "waa-waa-waa-waaaa" noise of futility.


Anne W. - Dec 14, 2014 11:19:50 am PST #9224 of 10434
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

I like that version better.


Anne W. - Dec 14, 2014 11:23:45 am PST #9225 of 10434
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

(cross-posted to Literary) Is there anyone out there who would be willing to beta-read a Code Name Verity fic I'm finishing up for Yuletide. Right now, I mostly need someone to help check character voices and to make sure I didn't muff any major bits of canon.


DebetEsse - Dec 14, 2014 11:24:37 am PST #9226 of 10434
Woe to the fucking wicked.

Anne, if you can't find anyone, I'd be willing. I've read it reasonably recently, though I can't swear I have the voices perfectly in my memory.


§ ita § - Dec 14, 2014 11:35:28 am PST #9227 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

The unique, funnel shape delivers a crispy corn crunch

Perfect!


Anne W. - Dec 14, 2014 12:24:48 pm PST #9228 of 10434
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Debet, that would be fabulous! I just want to make sure the thing (about 3k words) holds together. Is your profile addy the best way to get it to you?


DebetEsse - Dec 14, 2014 1:27:31 pm PST #9229 of 10434
Woe to the fucking wicked.

That'll work, Anne


Anne W. - Dec 14, 2014 2:26:56 pm PST #9230 of 10434
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Thank you, thank you, thank you! Insent!