Take me, sir. Take me hard.

Zoe ,'War Stories'


Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?

This thread is for fanfic recs, links, and discussion, but not for actual posting of fanfic.


Connie Neil - Dec 14, 2014 11:11:27 am PST #9223 of 10434
brillig

I'm hearing that "waa-waa-waa-waaaa" noise of futility.


Anne W. - Dec 14, 2014 11:19:50 am PST #9224 of 10434
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

I like that version better.


Anne W. - Dec 14, 2014 11:23:45 am PST #9225 of 10434
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

(cross-posted to Literary) Is there anyone out there who would be willing to beta-read a Code Name Verity fic I'm finishing up for Yuletide. Right now, I mostly need someone to help check character voices and to make sure I didn't muff any major bits of canon.


DebetEsse - Dec 14, 2014 11:24:37 am PST #9226 of 10434
Woe to the fucking wicked.

Anne, if you can't find anyone, I'd be willing. I've read it reasonably recently, though I can't swear I have the voices perfectly in my memory.


§ ita § - Dec 14, 2014 11:35:28 am PST #9227 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

The unique, funnel shape delivers a crispy corn crunch

Perfect!


Anne W. - Dec 14, 2014 12:24:48 pm PST #9228 of 10434
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Debet, that would be fabulous! I just want to make sure the thing (about 3k words) holds together. Is your profile addy the best way to get it to you?


DebetEsse - Dec 14, 2014 1:27:31 pm PST #9229 of 10434
Woe to the fucking wicked.

That'll work, Anne


Anne W. - Dec 14, 2014 2:26:56 pm PST #9230 of 10434
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Thank you, thank you, thank you! Insent!


Juliebird - Dec 14, 2014 3:04:23 pm PST #9231 of 10434
I am the fly who dreams of the spider

Just read a fabulously creepy Avengers fic (mild steve/tony) called What Lies Beneath by asktheravens. [link]

There's a sense of dread right from the beginning that never relents and gets steadily worse without going into full-on horror or losing its atmosphere.


§ ita § - Dec 14, 2014 3:59:19 pm PST #9232 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Stark spangled banner is one of the great ship names out there, I think. But I just can't help putting Steve into the mix. He's not supposed to be there, is he?

What is considered the correct etiquette for abandoning a story? I really hate getting a new story that is all author's note explaining a personal tale about why they can't go on, but I just came across one that said, effectively, "this story is now judge mid-story, mid fluff, and I'm gonna put drabbles here instead."

I was surprised how irritated that was. I think I prefer the author just walking away, since my memory isn't good enough (or the fics brilliant enough) to just forget it ever happened, pretty much.

Just start a new story entirely! And behave yourself and don't have content that doesn't match the summary.