Man, just ascend already.

Willow ,'Chosen'


Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?

This thread is for fanfic recs, links, and discussion, but not for actual posting of fanfic.


Anne W. - Dec 14, 2014 11:03:56 am PST #9222 of 10434
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

starting to feel hard bugles at their pants.

Do they play Taps? Or would reveille be more appropriate given the circumstances?


Connie Neil - Dec 14, 2014 11:11:27 am PST #9223 of 10434
brillig

I'm hearing that "waa-waa-waa-waaaa" noise of futility.


Anne W. - Dec 14, 2014 11:19:50 am PST #9224 of 10434
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

I like that version better.


Anne W. - Dec 14, 2014 11:23:45 am PST #9225 of 10434
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

(cross-posted to Literary) Is there anyone out there who would be willing to beta-read a Code Name Verity fic I'm finishing up for Yuletide. Right now, I mostly need someone to help check character voices and to make sure I didn't muff any major bits of canon.


DebetEsse - Dec 14, 2014 11:24:37 am PST #9226 of 10434
Woe to the fucking wicked.

Anne, if you can't find anyone, I'd be willing. I've read it reasonably recently, though I can't swear I have the voices perfectly in my memory.


§ ita § - Dec 14, 2014 11:35:28 am PST #9227 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

The unique, funnel shape delivers a crispy corn crunch

Perfect!


Anne W. - Dec 14, 2014 12:24:48 pm PST #9228 of 10434
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Debet, that would be fabulous! I just want to make sure the thing (about 3k words) holds together. Is your profile addy the best way to get it to you?


DebetEsse - Dec 14, 2014 1:27:31 pm PST #9229 of 10434
Woe to the fucking wicked.

That'll work, Anne


Anne W. - Dec 14, 2014 2:26:56 pm PST #9230 of 10434
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Thank you, thank you, thank you! Insent!


Juliebird - Dec 14, 2014 3:04:23 pm PST #9231 of 10434
I am the fly who dreams of the spider

Just read a fabulously creepy Avengers fic (mild steve/tony) called What Lies Beneath by asktheravens. [link]

There's a sense of dread right from the beginning that never relents and gets steadily worse without going into full-on horror or losing its atmosphere.