David, I've bookmarked that.
Here's a cool bit that I've never seen used in sex writing: When it's fully engorged and the head is purple-y, and you're lying on your back you can see the tip of the head bob ever-so-slightly with each pulse.
Also, writers rarely use the balls drawing up tighter to indicate high excitement - but that's an indicater too.
Ah. So this isn't the problem with those leather pants?
Well... not with the pair I brought home. Some of the ones I tried on may have had that problem, but I found a pair that fit better.
See, Hec, that's because the human lava lamp act? Just not hot to read about.
No, just for teenaged boys in parked cars.
Heh. I have to confess that I've never had a guy try this on me in real life, but hey, shows up all the time in fic.
See, Hec, that's because the human lava lamp act? Just not hot to read about.
All I know is that when Jen K. wrote about ballplay, it provoked a certain amount of frisson.
I note that in the
good
fanfic, I can find examples of both of those. Thank goodness for the good stuff, it gives one faith in fanfic, not to mention humanity and world peace.
Sure, but she probably had the Sox
win.
See, Hec, that's because the human lava lamp act? Just not hot to read about.
"His previously low-slung scrotum, wrinkled and hairy, pulled itself taut with his rising excitement, bringing the boys in closer to the base of his cock..."
Yeah. NSM with the hotness, there.