(If I ever finish my enormous fic...)
Well, then, can you also work in something about Buffy not choosing Dawn? Because unless they meant she didn't chose Dawn to stay and fight, I'm thinking that was another thread left hanging. And they could have resolved it by Dawn insisting that the amulet was for her – that she has a soul but isn’t (entirely) human. Then Buffy would have had to choose between Dawn and Spike. And she could then not choose Dawn.
Then Dawn would be upstairs when Willow’s spell doesn’t work at first. Then someone (Willow or Xander – because in my story Xander and Dawn are also there protecting Willow in case the Bringers attack) realizes that they don’t have all the Slayer blood, and they need Dawn’s blood, and since that’s energy-laden – KA*BOOM!
And then, could you work in the side-story about how Oz returns and that maybe there’s some discussion as to whether the reference is to him (he’s a werewolf after all).
Also, then, you could buy me a pony.
Every time I hear that, it makes me want to ask "have you tried listening to the song normally? You really don't have to put that much work into it..."
I always thought Hotel California was implying that California was Hell. Then I lived there for a year. So now I no longer think that. Now I know it to be true.
About the only worthwhile thing from the movie Playing God with David Duchovney is his narration line in the beginning about how "on a good day, Hell can look a lot like Los Angeles."
I live here, I don't want to live anywhere else, and I think LA/California = Hell jokes are funny as hell.
'Cuz they're true.
(Narrator - I think you have to write me a revisionist fic - and could the final spell actually be the enjoining spell and not some random-wordless thing, that focused too much camera time on Kennedy.)
Fine, revise away. Kennedy should have been downstairs with the rest of the cannon fodder, anyway. (Also, that would be a nice connection to the Season 4 battle that defeated Adam.)
You do it, Narrator. I already have a book sized outline for mine. It's scary (although I have half of the stuff we've talked as reason for writing - I'm not revising the past in it, though).
Apropos of nothing, Four Star Mary's, Pain is still a good song.
Eggs and bacon:
Cindy, your tagline ("Close your eyes.") reminded me of something. At the end of S2, doesn't Buffy tell Angel to do exactly that before she skewers him and sends him on his way to Hell?
Spike, on the other hand, goes out with the following line: "I want to see how it ends."
Neat contrast.
Signed, Is Still Sure Willow's Bi
She isn't? Color me surprised.
Makes thousands.
sniff.
Other than that, I gots nothing.