Remember my resume question? I just want opinions on phrasing a job description. So, which is better? This:
I was responsible for scheduling, training, and supervising local crews for touring shows, University events and rental events. I also served as house lighting designer and master electrician. Designs included Dance Arts, Windham Hill's Winter Solstice Concerts, Branford Marsalis Quartet, George Clinton and the P-Funk All-Stars, and many more.
Or this:
Scheduling, training, and supervising local crews for touring shows, University events and rental events. House lighting designer and master electrician. Designs included Windham Hill's Winter Solstice, Branford Marsalis Quartet, and George Clinton & the P-Funk All-Stars.
In my current situation, I know the person who will be looking at the resume and I'm leaning toward the 2nd one.