I think the first one.
Eta: yeah, totally depends on the audience. They're both fine.
That's beautiful. Or taken literally, incredibly gross.
Buffy ,'Potential'
Natter 72: We Were Unprepared for This
Off-topic discussion. Wanna talk about corsets, duct tape, or physics? This is the place. Detailed discussion of any current-season TV must be whitefonted.
-t - Mar 28, 2014 10:39:26 am PDT #23862 of 30000
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration
Amy - Mar 28, 2014 10:41:45 am PDT #23863 of 30000
Because books.
I'd go with the second one then.
Theodosia - Mar 28, 2014 10:59:15 am PDT #23864 of 30000
'we all walk this earth feeling we are frauds. The trick is to be grateful and hope the caper doesn't end any time soon"
ita!
(That is all.)
Sue - Mar 28, 2014 11:30:03 am PDT #23865 of 30000
hip deep in pie
Second one, in bullet point format, maybe.
SuziQ - Mar 28, 2014 11:35:02 am PDT #23866 of 30000
Back tattoos of the mother is that you are absolutely right - Ame
Lived.
Damn.
Words?
Damn.
Sue - Mar 28, 2014 11:37:02 am PDT #23867 of 30000
hip deep in pie
Plot twist: a coworker drove me home, and I just had soup. I may perk up enough to head to the movie.
Laura - Mar 28, 2014 11:51:38 am PDT #23868 of 30000
Our wings are not tired.
I think I will nap on the comfy couch in my office before I drive home. I had such a frustrating day that I went across the street and got a couple pieces of pizza and a root beer. Now I want to nap.
Too tired to know what I think of my work.
How exciting, Suzi. I'm trying to decide if I would be terrified on the helicopter ride. I do want to kayak through the canyon for sure.
Scrappy - Mar 28, 2014 12:01:08 pm PDT #23869 of 30000
Life moves pretty fast. You don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.
I want lots of details, Suzi, when you recover!
aurelia - Mar 28, 2014 12:04:34 pm PDT #23870 of 30000
All sorrows can be borne if you put them into a story. Tell me a story.
Bullet points will take too much space. This is for a brief, one-page version of the resume.
Jesse - Mar 28, 2014 12:08:34 pm PDT #23871 of 30000
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.
Then definitely not the "I did X" -- just start with the verbs. And if you make those three sentences three bullets, it looks from here like taking up the same amount of space, but I leave that to your discretion.