Was it the restraining order?
Hee!!
Dear Super Porny Pants -
If you were in my brain, you would be pleased indeed. Almost as pleased as I am. Over and over again. Usually on a Neptune High cafeteria table.
Love,
The Empress
Xander: Hey, Red. What you got in the basket, little girl? Buffy: Weapons.
Xander/Buffy ,'Help'
Spike's Bitches 46: Don't I get a cookie?
[NAFDA] Spike-centric discussion. Lusty, lewd (only occasionally crude), risqué (and frisqué), bawdy (Oh, lawdy!), flirty ('cuz we're purty), raunchy talk inside. Caveat lector.
Aims - Aug 29, 2010 5:52:05 pm PDT #574 of 30000
Shit's all sorts of different now.
Trudy Booth - Aug 29, 2010 5:56:44 pm PDT #575 of 30000
Greece's financial crisis threatens to take down all of Western civilization - a civilization they themselves founded. A rather tragic irony - which is something they also invented. - Jon Stewart
t SUPER PORNY PANTS BEAMS WITH PRIDE
Strix - Aug 29, 2010 6:53:39 pm PDT #576 of 30000
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
"Renaissance Man",
I can't stop myself; it's a sickness.The comma goes inside the quote marks.
I might gently add that you might proof it or edit it a bit (I would be happy to help you do so.)
This might help you find geeky girls who are unreasonably turned off by punctuation errors: [link]
Or I might be a freak. But I found Dan through OKC, so it does work. I know a few people married through it.
beth b - Aug 29, 2010 7:09:25 pm PDT #577 of 30000
oh joy! Oh Rapture ! I have a brain!
so not sober. Niles Flea market weekend. that ended with a jam and political talk. Usually this weekend is way to hot, but not this year. so fing freezing.
o_ a , good luck. I wish you luck.
DavidS - Aug 29, 2010 7:11:39 pm PDT #578 of 30000
"Look, son, if it's good enough for Shirley Bassey, it's good enough for you."
The comma goes inside the quote marks.
In America. Not in England.
billytea - Aug 29, 2010 7:21:58 pm PDT #579 of 30000
You were a wrong baby who grew up wrong. The wrong kind of wrong. It's better you hear it from a friend.
In America. Not in England.
I was wondering about that. My reaction was, "The comma isn't part of the quote. Why would it go in the quote marks?"
Zenkitty - Aug 29, 2010 7:25:28 pm PDT #580 of 30000
Every now and then, I think I might actually be a little odd.
The comma goes inside the quote marks.
Oh, goodness, the number of arguments I've had over this point. I become weary of it all. Charles, bring me my tonic! faints
Strix - Aug 29, 2010 7:26:43 pm PDT #581 of 30000
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
I stab in your general direction, Hec. Ptui!
O-A is American. Comma goes IN.
Polter-Cow - Aug 29, 2010 7:36:17 pm PDT #582 of 30000
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!
IN!
omnis_audis - Aug 29, 2010 7:45:02 pm PDT #583 of 30000
omnis, pursue. That's an order from a shy woman who can use M-16. - Shir
and the pacifist starts a war. :: sigh ::
My reaction was, "The comma isn't part of the quote. Why would it go in the quote marks?"In this, I am English (or Australian). Alas, I live in America, so I corrected it.
Would a disclaimer that says "I suk @ grammer and puntuation n speling" help?
(oh boy, that last line is going to make a lot of eyes wince)
Seriously, thank you all for the help.
eta: A few more edits. Some format clean up. Bullet points for the 6 things. Remove some comma run on sentences. Removed some parenthetical statements. Hopefully improved, and not compounded the errors.