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Strix - Aug 29, 2010 6:53:39 pm PDT #576 of 30000
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

"Renaissance Man",

I can't stop myself; it's a sickness.The comma goes inside the quote marks.

I might gently add that you might proof it or edit it a bit (I would be happy to help you do so.)

This might help you find geeky girls who are unreasonably turned off by punctuation errors: [link]

Or I might be a freak. But I found Dan through OKC, so it does work. I know a few people married through it.

beth b - Aug 29, 2010 7:09:25 pm PDT #577 of 30000
oh joy! Oh Rapture ! I have a brain!

so not sober. Niles Flea market weekend. that ended with a jam and political talk. Usually this weekend is way to hot, but not this year. so fing freezing.

o_ a , good luck. I wish you luck.

DavidS - Aug 29, 2010 7:11:39 pm PDT #578 of 30000
"Look, son, if it's good enough for Shirley Bassey, it's good enough for you."

The comma goes inside the quote marks.

In America. Not in England.

billytea - Aug 29, 2010 7:21:58 pm PDT #579 of 30000
You were a wrong baby who grew up wrong. The wrong kind of wrong. It's better you hear it from a friend.

In America. Not in England.

I was wondering about that. My reaction was, "The comma isn't part of the quote. Why would it go in the quote marks?"

Zenkitty - Aug 29, 2010 7:25:28 pm PDT #580 of 30000
Every now and then, I think I might actually be a little odd.

The comma goes inside the quote marks.

Oh, goodness, the number of arguments I've had over this point. I become weary of it all. Charles, bring me my tonic! faints

Strix - Aug 29, 2010 7:26:43 pm PDT #581 of 30000
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger

I stab in your general direction, Hec. Ptui!

O-A is American. Comma goes IN.

Polter-Cow - Aug 29, 2010 7:36:17 pm PDT #582 of 30000
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

IN!

omnis_audis - Aug 29, 2010 7:45:02 pm PDT #583 of 30000
omnis, pursue. That's an order from a shy woman who can use M-16. - Shir

and the pacifist starts a war. :: sigh ::

My reaction was, "The comma isn't part of the quote. Why would it go in the quote marks?"
In this, I am English (or Australian). Alas, I live in America, so I corrected it.

Would a disclaimer that says "I suk @ grammer and puntuation n speling" help?

(oh boy, that last line is going to make a lot of eyes wince)

Seriously, thank you all for the help.

eta: A few more edits. Some format clean up. Bullet points for the 6 things. Remove some comma run on sentences. Removed some parenthetical statements. Hopefully improved, and not compounded the errors.

omnis_audis - Aug 29, 2010 8:05:37 pm PDT #584 of 30000
omnis, pursue. That's an order from a shy woman who can use M-16. - Shir

Um. Is this gal in a wedding dress in her pictures? [link] It sure looks like it. Nothing against divorced folk. But it's an interesting choice for pictures on a dating site, no?

javachik - Aug 29, 2010 8:35:49 pm PDT #585 of 30000
Our wings are not tired.

I can't stop myself; it's a sickness.The comma goes inside the quote marks.

Yeah, only if what's in the quotes is not a fragment. Plus, totally changes depending on which style guide is your master.

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