t SUPER PORNY PANTS BEAMS WITH PRIDE
Don't belong. Dangerous, like you. Can't be controlled. Can't be trusted. Everyone could just go on without me and not have to worry. People could be what they wanted to be. Could be with the people they wanted. Live simple. No secrets.
River ,'Objects In Space'
Spike's Bitches 46: Don't I get a cookie?
[NAFDA] Spike-centric discussion. Lusty, lewd (only occasionally crude), risqué (and frisqué), bawdy (Oh, lawdy!), flirty ('cuz we're purty), raunchy talk inside. Caveat lector.
Trudy Booth - Aug 29, 2010 5:56:44 pm PDT #575 of 30000
Greece's financial crisis threatens to take down all of Western civilization - a civilization they themselves founded. A rather tragic irony - which is something they also invented. - Jon Stewart
Strix - Aug 29, 2010 6:53:39 pm PDT #576 of 30000
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
"Renaissance Man",
I can't stop myself; it's a sickness.The comma goes inside the quote marks.
I might gently add that you might proof it or edit it a bit (I would be happy to help you do so.)
This might help you find geeky girls who are unreasonably turned off by punctuation errors: [link]
Or I might be a freak. But I found Dan through OKC, so it does work. I know a few people married through it.
beth b - Aug 29, 2010 7:09:25 pm PDT #577 of 30000
oh joy! Oh Rapture ! I have a brain!
so not sober. Niles Flea market weekend. that ended with a jam and political talk. Usually this weekend is way to hot, but not this year. so fing freezing.
o_ a , good luck. I wish you luck.
DavidS - Aug 29, 2010 7:11:39 pm PDT #578 of 30000
"Look, son, if it's good enough for Shirley Bassey, it's good enough for you."
The comma goes inside the quote marks.
In America. Not in England.
billytea - Aug 29, 2010 7:21:58 pm PDT #579 of 30000
You were a wrong baby who grew up wrong. The wrong kind of wrong. It's better you hear it from a friend.
In America. Not in England.
I was wondering about that. My reaction was, "The comma isn't part of the quote. Why would it go in the quote marks?"
Zenkitty - Aug 29, 2010 7:25:28 pm PDT #580 of 30000
Every now and then, I think I might actually be a little odd.
The comma goes inside the quote marks.
Oh, goodness, the number of arguments I've had over this point. I become weary of it all. Charles, bring me my tonic! faints
Strix - Aug 29, 2010 7:26:43 pm PDT #581 of 30000
A dress should be tight enough to show you're a woman but loose enough to flee from zombies. — Ginger
I stab in your general direction, Hec. Ptui!
O-A is American. Comma goes IN.
Polter-Cow - Aug 29, 2010 7:36:17 pm PDT #582 of 30000
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!
IN!
omnis_audis - Aug 29, 2010 7:45:02 pm PDT #583 of 30000
omnis, pursue. That's an order from a shy woman who can use M-16. - Shir
and the pacifist starts a war. :: sigh ::
My reaction was, "The comma isn't part of the quote. Why would it go in the quote marks?"In this, I am English (or Australian). Alas, I live in America, so I corrected it.
Would a disclaimer that says "I suk @ grammer and puntuation n speling" help?
(oh boy, that last line is going to make a lot of eyes wince)
Seriously, thank you all for the help.
eta: A few more edits. Some format clean up. Bullet points for the 6 things. Remove some comma run on sentences. Removed some parenthetical statements. Hopefully improved, and not compounded the errors.
omnis_audis - Aug 29, 2010 8:05:37 pm PDT #584 of 30000
omnis, pursue. That's an order from a shy woman who can use M-16. - Shir
Um. Is this gal in a wedding dress in her pictures? [link] It sure looks like it. Nothing against divorced folk. But it's an interesting choice for pictures on a dating site, no?