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bonny, I like the resized pic. I would set it flush to the left side, which would allow you to size the font back up on the second part of the text.
No, I'm not sure why I have such clear opinions on this matter. I hope they are helpful. Feel free to ignore them if not.
smonster, I adjusted the photo to the left.
So what do y'all think? Is the photo good enough at this size?
Also, now that the text is bigger, should the name at the bottom be indented to the ellipsis, or flush to the word 'Set?'
I can't tell if it looks balanced.
My landlady/friend just came by with her adorable 2 yo bundle of chaos. She's finally going to fix my dryer today, hallelujah. She asked what the deal was with New Orleans and was like, "Do I just need to evict you so you don't have a place to live?" Awesome.
bonny, much better. As for the name at the bottom, maybe center it? I think the picture is fine.
Sweet?
Yeah, it's nice to get that tough love support.
Looks great bonny. My only other comment is that you use a serial comma in the second bullet but not the first.
brenda, good catch!
I am totally unclear about serial comma etiquette. Which is better?
adults and couples to develop great communication skills, healthy relationships, and a satisfying worklife.
kids (7 & up) to develop people skills and build character, to learn successful habits, and to be comfortable in the world.
or this
adults and couples to develop great communication skills, healthy relationships and a satisfying worklife.
kids (7 & up) to develop people skills and build character, to learn successful habits and to be comfortable in the world.
Once this is resolved, it's DONE!
Thanks to everyone who commented. I'm actually satisfied and fairly confident about the finished product. THAT is a source of celebration around these parts.
So, cheers!
You're welcome, bonny! I'm going to let someone else do the serial comment bit. Not my strength.
I need to get motivated. Today is supposed to be a big Discardia day, and I'm still in my pjs on the couch, watching Castle. I've already missed the HHW dropoff window.
I say leave the commas in. But either is technically correct, as long as they're either both there or both not there. I think it reads more clearly with the commas.
bonny, I like it except I'm not a big fan of serial ellipses in this context. I'd rather see a bullet or dash.