bonny, much better. As for the name at the bottom, maybe center it? I think the picture is fine.
Willow: Something evil-crashed to earth in this. Then it broke out and slithered away to do badness.
Giles: Well, in all fairness, we don't really know about the "slithered" part. Anya: No, no, I'm sure it frisked about like a fluffy lamb.
'Never Leave Me'
Spike's Bitches 46: Don't I get a cookie?
[NAFDA] Spike-centric discussion. Lusty, lewd (only occasionally crude), risqué (and frisqué), bawdy (Oh, lawdy!), flirty ('cuz we're purty), raunchy talk inside. Caveat lector.
smonster - Jan 29, 2011 7:00:52 am PST #14238 of 30000
We won’t stop until everyone is gay.
beekaytee - Jan 29, 2011 7:00:55 am PST #14239 of 30000
Compassionately intolerant
Sweet?
Yeah, it's nice to get that tough love support.
brenda m - Jan 29, 2011 7:20:53 am PST #14240 of 30000
If you're going through hell/keep on going/don't slow down/keep your fear from showing/you might be gone/'fore the devil even knows you're there
Looks great bonny. My only other comment is that you use a serial comma in the second bullet but not the first.
beekaytee - Jan 29, 2011 7:38:13 am PST #14241 of 30000
Compassionately intolerant
brenda, good catch!
I am totally unclear about serial comma etiquette. Which is better?
adults and couples to develop great communication skills, healthy relationships, and a satisfying worklife.
kids (7 & up) to develop people skills and build character, to learn successful habits, and to be comfortable in the world.
or this
adults and couples to develop great communication skills, healthy relationships and a satisfying worklife.
kids (7 & up) to develop people skills and build character, to learn successful habits and to be comfortable in the world.
Once this is resolved, it's DONE!
Thanks to everyone who commented. I'm actually satisfied and fairly confident about the finished product. THAT is a source of celebration around these parts.
So, cheers!
smonster - Jan 29, 2011 7:47:55 am PST #14242 of 30000
We won’t stop until everyone is gay.
You're welcome, bonny! I'm going to let someone else do the serial comment bit. Not my strength.
I need to get motivated. Today is supposed to be a big Discardia day, and I'm still in my pjs on the couch, watching Castle. I've already missed the HHW dropoff window.
Hil R. - Jan 29, 2011 7:49:47 am PST #14243 of 30000
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l
I say leave the commas in. But either is technically correct, as long as they're either both there or both not there. I think it reads more clearly with the commas.
quester - Jan 29, 2011 7:55:33 am PST #14244 of 30000
Danger is my middle name, only I spell it R. u. t. h. - Tina Belcher.
bonny, I like it except I'm not a big fan of serial ellipses in this context. I'd rather see a bullet or dash.
Glamcookie - Jan 29, 2011 8:04:25 am PST #14245 of 30000
I know my own heart and understand my fellow man. But I am made unlike anyone I have ever met. I dare to say I am like no one in the whole world. - Anne Lister
Shoe post!
Looking for a black wedge shoe and I think I'm down to two possibilities:
Thoughts?
Along the way, I found other WANTS!:
- Ankle boots >[link]
- OMGLOVE >[link]
- Black flat with studs (these have my name written all over them) >[link]
Dana - Jan 29, 2011 8:05:17 am PST #14246 of 30000
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.
I vote for the shoe.
Vortex - Jan 29, 2011 8:14:36 am PST #14247 of 30000
"Cry havoc and let slip the boobs of war!" -- Miracleman
People not sucking: Gay Marine's Husband Surprised at Respect Shown by Naval Academy
I especially loved this bit
Ketterson sent a copy of the marriage license. That changed everything.
“I was respected,” he said. “From that moment on, I was next of kin. They were amazing.”
The USNA alumni association sent Ketterson a letter expressing condolence for the loss of his husband.
“His next of kin was treated with the same dignity and respect afforded to the next of kin of all USNA grads who desire interment at the Columbarium,” said Jennifer Erickson, a spokesperson for the academy. “We didn’t do anything differently.”