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[NAFDA] Spike-centric discussion. Lusty, lewd (only occasionally crude), risqué (and frisqué), bawdy (Oh, lawdy!), flirty ('cuz we're purty), raunchy talk inside. Caveat lector.
You're welcome, bonny! I'm going to let someone else do the serial comment bit. Not my strength.
I need to get motivated. Today is supposed to be a big Discardia day, and I'm still in my pjs on the couch, watching Castle. I've already missed the HHW dropoff window.
I say leave the commas in. But either is technically correct, as long as they're either both there or both not there. I think it reads more clearly with the commas.
bonny, I like it except I'm not a big fan of serial ellipses in this context. I'd rather see a bullet or dash.
Shoe post!
Looking for a black wedge shoe and I think I'm down to two possibilities:
Along the way, I found other WANTS!:
I vote for the shoe.
People not sucking: Gay Marine's Husband Surprised at Respect Shown by Naval Academy
I especially loved this bit
Ketterson sent a copy of the marriage license. That changed everything.
“I was respected,” he said. “From that moment on, I was next of kin. They were amazing.”
The USNA alumni association sent Ketterson a letter expressing condolence for the loss of his husband.
“His next of kin was treated with the same dignity and respect afforded to the next of kin of all USNA grads who desire interment at the Columbarium,” said Jennifer Erickson, a spokesperson for the academy. “We didn’t do anything differently.”
Rockstars, you all are rockstars.
There, I said it.
I said it because it is true.
I adjusted the commas and added a green bullet to replace the ellipses. You were totally right, quester. Now it looks much more professional. Funny how a detail like that can effect a piece.
Thank you all some much for indulging my need. And if you are interested in the final product, you can see it here.
I vote for the shoe.
I love the whimsical style of the sandal, but I too vote for the shoe. The style name says it all "Ageless." Classic and versatile.
Oh, that's lovely. eta that was about the USNA not being assholes.
bonny, it looks great! Gorgeous.