I just tried to read another story where the boys were startled and dropped their guns which then got jammed with snow. I don't care if there's hot porn later. It's just stupid.

And then there's the one which is nice and clear with the summary:

Dean and Castiel are brothers and their parents are dead. From the ages of 6 and 4 they share a room at the childrens home they end up in. Dean means a lot to Cas - Father, mother, brother, best friend, and quite possibly everything else as well. Incest, not creepy, I hope.

No, what would be creepy about that? Heaven forfend. I mean, seriously.

oh ita, you missed the best part in the first chapter:

Ok, there are plotty reasons why this is all ok, but to reveal them now would ruin the point – so you'll just have to trust me. I had this idea after reading another fic and was left with the idea that Castiel makes a much better brother than Sam. So yes, whilst this is technically an incest fic, it does have a point and I'll try not to let it be weird.

there's a reason why the incest is okay.

Also, Cas makes a better brother than Sam.

I'm not sure which I am more agog at.

Oh, I definitely did not click through.

"technically an incest fic"

OMG, what is our fandom?

And, seriously, if Castiel makes a better brother, you're doing it wrong.

capslock author's note writer wrote me back. *Maybe* they'll think about changing their disclaimer. But it's about the plot, gosh darnit. And if only we'd just look past that and read for the plot, it's not the authors fault the advertisement sucks. --Oh, wait.

OMG, I'm picking a fight. This will end badly for me, I can tell.

That's so absurd. It's like cooking a huge seafood meal out of the freshest, best catch of the day and telling everyone to ignore the bits of seaweed and the sand in the shells. By then, no one's going to care if the lobster is frigging magical.

That's like the chef declaring "I DIDN'T MAKE SURE THE PORK WAS COOKED TO 145 DEGREES. AND THE MUSSELS MIGHT NOT HAVE OPENED WHEN I BOILED THEM. EAT UP."

Go, Julie, go!

Also, if you go back and taste your seafood meal, you might just be able to adjust the seasonings to bring out the flavour of that magical lobster even better. And get rid of the fucking sand, heathen.

This is her reply to a much more mature constructive criticism:

You're right. I should have posted warnings. Although, I thought the title of this part was very clear and the rating (which is R) I felt was enough. Of course, I have now posted that there is violence so nobody else will be surprised.

there is no title beyond "Profound Bond Part Three"

I apologize if you were offended by such a chapter. This was my first written violence chapter and I did not mean to surprise anybody.

hence the warning for violence only after a commenter noted the lack

Also, I do not edit my Supernatural stories. This is mostly because I do not have a beta for these written accounts of fiction but mainly because I write these out and post them right away. I generally write non- stop at one time in a freewrtiting manner, which why I do have mistakes.

Need I say more?

It saddens me that you will no longer be reading this story. I not take offense but it does hurt to know that there are those who do not like what I have come up with.

Dude, it's not the content, it's your lack of spellcheck, which google has for free, or mozilla.

If you are interested you can take a look at my profile and go through other stories I have posted on here. I do not know your preferred pairing but this is the only Destiel fic I have going. Seeing as it if my first one, I wanted to finish this one before I go on to make more Dean/Cas stories.

The writer hears the concrit and absorbs it to the point that after acknowledging that the commenter will no longer read any more of her stories, to please feel free to read MORE of her stories.

Thanks for all the fish.

She's either fourteen or English is not her first language. And neither one really excuses her.

Writing's not a speed sport, babe. Take. Your. Time.

I have more respect for people who's English is not native, they tend to know grammar better than I do.